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A Smile in the Rain

Moments That Make the Heart Speak

By Sudais ZakwanPublished about 2 hours ago 3 min read

A Smile in the Rain

Moments That Make the Heart Speak

Amara had never been good at noticing people. She moved through life with her head down, focusing on schedules, deadlines, and the constant noise of her own thoughts. That rainy afternoon, she had ducked into a small café to escape the sudden downpour, shaking drops from her umbrella and wiping fog from her glasses. The place was warm, fragrant with coffee and pastries, and almost empty, save for a young man sitting by the window with a sketchbook in hand.

He looked up as she entered, offering a small, shy smile. Amara felt a strange warmth, not from attraction at first, but from the unspoken acknowledgment of her presence. She hesitated, then chose a corner table, her umbrella dripping onto the floor. As she settled, she caught his glance again. This time, he nodded slightly, returning to his drawings.

Minutes passed. Rain tapped against the glass, and Amara sipped her tea, feeling an unfamiliar lightness. She couldn’t explain why, but her eyes kept drifting to the sketchbook. Every now and then, she noticed a figure resembling her, sketched with careful strokes: her coat, her umbrella, the way she tucked her hair behind her ear. She blushed, surprised by the attention but also flattered.

Curiosity overcame her shyness. “Did you… draw me?” she asked softly, her voice almost drowned by the rain.

The young man looked up, startled, then chuckled. “I—I hope it’s okay. I just noticed you, and something about the way you paused at the door… it felt worth capturing.” He avoided her eyes, nervous. Amara felt her heartbeat quicken. There was no awkwardness in his expression, just honesty and a quiet admiration.

“Wow,” she whispered, smiling. “It’s… very sweet.” The corners of her lips lifted involuntarily. She realized she hadn’t smiled like that all week, maybe all month. It felt natural, unforced, like the gentle warmth of the café on a cold, rainy day

They started talking. At first, it was simple—comments about the rain, the café, favorite pastries—but soon it deepened. He shared stories about the sketches he had done for years, how people often went unnoticed, moments that passed without appreciation, yet inspired him. She found herself laughing, teasing him lightly, feeling a blush she could not hide. There was something innocent, tender, in the way he looked at her, something that made ordinary conversation feel extraordinary.

Hours passed unnoticed. The rain slowed to a drizzle, and the sunlight broke through clouds, painting the café in gold. Amara realized she had spent the afternoon not thinking about work, deadlines, or stress, but fully immersed in a simple, human connection. She felt lighter, happier, almost giddy at the small spark of warmth growing between them.

Before leaving, she glanced at his sketchbook one last time. Inside was a drawing of the two of them, seated at their separate tables, umbrellas forgotten, smiles bright. She laughed softly, feeling a blush creep up her neck.

Outside, the world was wet but shimmering. They walked out together, sharing an umbrella, laughing at the rain as it soaked their shoes. That afternoon, Amara understood something simple: sometimes, life’s most meaningful moments are the quiet, unexpected ones that make the heart race and the cheeks burn. She had never imagined that a smile in the rain could feel like the start of something unforgettable.

sometimes, life’s most meaningful moments are the quiet, unexpected ones that make the heart race and the cheeks burn. She had never imagined that a smile in the rain could feel like the start of something unforgettable.

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About the Creator

Sudais Zakwan

Sudais Zakwan – Storyteller of Emotions

Sudais Zakwan is a passionate story writer known for crafting emotionally rich and thought-provoking stories that resonate with readers of all ages. With a unique voice and creative flair.

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