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The Tower Without Doors

By GoldenSpeechPublished 4 months ago 1 min read

In 1603, near the Bavarian Alps, a nobleman’s daughter named Althea von Raben was declared cursed at birth — her hair growing faster than humanly possible, glowing faintly under moonlight. Her mother, terrified, locked her in a tower with no doors.

Only servants could reach her window by rope to deliver food. She spent 17 years in that tower, singing to the stars. Travelers who passed claimed to hear her voice echoing for miles. Some swore vines grew unnaturally thick around the stone walls, as if trying to free her.

When the tower was finally opened, it was empty. Only a long braid remained, coiled like a golden serpent on the floor.

In the decades after, villagers found children in the woods — pale, with strange golden streaks in their hair. They said they belonged to the woman in the tower, who came down at night to “borrow” what life she could.

When the Brothers Grimm adapted her tale, they made it sweeter — love, freedom, happy endings. But old Bavarian monks kept the original warning:

“Never build your home where a woman once sang to the moon — for her song was a prayer unanswered.”

Children's FictionChildhood

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  • Julia Andrew4 months ago

    I just read your story and the characters came alive in my head Can I show you my art style

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