Adorable

haiku

By Mark GrahamPublished about a year ago • 1 min read

baby in bear suit (pexels.com)

Look at the baby

asleep so peacefully

dreaming of what.

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Mark Graham

I am a person who really likes to read and write and to share what I learned with all my education. My page will mainly be book reviews and critiques of old and new books that I have read and will read. There will also be other bits, too.

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Test10 months ago
So beautiful.
Gideon Kiprutoabout a year ago
I like babies, cute 🥺
Cindy Calderabout a year ago
Sweet babies are heaven sent.

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