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The Plot Thickens

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By Harper LewisPublished 3 days ago โ€ข Updated a day ago โ€ข 1 min read

Okay, think back. What happened after Debbie left, after I came out of my coma? Iโ€™m serious, man. She broke my heart bad, and I didnโ€™t come out of my apartment for like a week, and then only because I was out of weed and booze. The guys actually came over and dragged my ass to band practice then force fed me chicken wings and IPA. Good dudes, always have my back.

But one night, I went bar hopping with Tom and Joe, and I honestly have no idea what happened after we left The Blind Tiger. To tell you the truth, I think Tom may have roofied me, as well as the girls at the table with us. I woke up with one of them, Tina, I think, but neither of us could remember anything after the second round of shots at the Tiger.

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Harper Lewis

I'm a weirdo nerd whoโ€™s extremely subversive. I like rocks, incense, and all kinds of witchy stuff. Intrusive rhyme bothers me.

MA English literature, College of Charleston

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  • Patrick Brownabout 21 hours ago

    This is one of the guys I have sympathy for.

  • kp3 days ago

    excited for this to flesh out!

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