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Beneath the Jasmine Sky

A Tale of Love, Choices, and the Whispers of the Heart

By Shah saab ITPublished 9 months ago 4 min read

In the quiet town of Gulshanpur, where the air smelled of jasmine and evening tea, lived Mr. Shahdal — a young teacher with gentle eyes, a poetic soul, and a smile that carried the warmth of a summer afternoon. After years of studying literature abroad, he had returned to his hometown not just with knowledge, but with a heart full of dreams and memories that hadn’t faded.

Among the people who greeted his return were two young women — Marram and Muneeba — childhood friends who had grown into very different kinds of beauty. Marram had a softness in her presence, like the wind through tall grass. She was thoughtful, quiet, with eyes that always seemed to be reading something in the silence. Muneeba was the opposite — full of energy and charm, a voice that lit up a room, a spirit that couldn’t be contained.

Both had once played with Shahdal beneath the old mango tree near the village school. But the laughter of children had faded, replaced now by long conversations, glances held a second too long, and the quiet ache of unspoken feelings.

Marram, ever the lover of books and words, started helping Shahdal with his poetry lessons. She brought calmness to his chaotic thoughts, and when she recited poetry, it was as if time paused just to listen.

Muneeba, meanwhile, was the town’s rising star. She wrote for local journals, challenged traditional views in her speeches, and brought energy wherever she went. With Shahdal, she shared her bold dreams — to write a book, to change the world, to be remembered. And he listened with fascination, feeling pulled into her fire.

Shahdal found himself torn. With Marram, he felt peace. With Muneeba, passion. And as much as he tried to deny it, he had fallen for them both.

One evening, as spring painted the sky in shades of orange and purple, the three of them sat beneath the old neem tree where they'd once played. The breeze was gentle, the scent of jasmine in the air.

Shahdal looked at them both, his heart heavy with the weight of love.

“Marram, Muneeba,” he began, “you are both so dear to me. I never imagined love could be this complicated. With you, Marram, I feel like I can rest, like I’ve come home. And with you, Muneeba, I feel alive, as if every part of me is awakened.”

Muneeba raised an eyebrow, half amused, half wounded. Marram looked away, her fingers brushing a fallen leaf beside her.

“I don’t want to hurt either of you,” Shahdal continued, “but I also can’t live in confusion. I need to know… what do we do now?”

For a long moment, no one spoke.

Then Marram whispered, “Sometimes, love isn’t about choosing who makes your heart race, but who helps you become who you truly are.”

Muneeba laughed softly, though there was a tremble in her voice. “And sometimes love is fire — it doesn’t wait to be measured. It burns, even when it shouldn’t.”

The three sat in silence, the breeze wrapping around them like a memory they couldn’t hold onto.

Over the next few days, distance began to grow. Muneeba, ever fearless, packed her things and moved to the city for a job opportunity. Before she left, she left a letter on Shahdal’s doorstep.

"You made me believe in a love that isn’t always returned the way we hope. That’s still love, though. Thank you. I’ll always carry you in my story."

Marram stayed, but things were never the same. The closeness that had once felt effortless now felt fragile, like a thread stretched too thin. And so, quietly, she too began to step away, eventually accepting a teaching position in a distant hill town.

Shahdal remained in Gulshanpur, alone with his books and students, often walking the paths they had once taken together. The jasmine tree still bloomed every spring, and the old neem tree still held their echoes.

Years passed. One rainy evening, as thunder rolled in the distance, Shahdal sat in his small home reading a new poetry collection. A knock came at the door.

It was a parcel — two letters.

The first was from Muneeba. She was married now, living in Lahore, with two children and a successful writing career. Her letter was warm, filled with gratitude.

"I don’t regret loving you. You helped me find my voice, even when my heart broke. I hope you’ve found peace too."

The second was from Marram. She was living quietly in a mountain village, still writing poetry, still believing in quiet love.

"Some loves don’t need a title, Shahdal. We loved in a moment, and that was enough. I hope you’re still teaching, still dreaming."

Shahdal folded both letters, smiled softly, and poured himself a cup of tea. The rain tapped gently on the windows, just like it used to when they sat by the fire, talking of dreams and impossible things.

He didn’t end up with either Marram or Muneeba. But he carried both in his heart — one the echo of a fire that once burned, the other the stillness that taught him to listen to silence.

Not all love stories end in union. Some end in growth. And beneath the jasmine sky of Gulshanpur, Mr. Shahdal’s heart was full — not with regret, but with gratitude for the love he had known.

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Shah saab IT

I'm. Shah saab IT. From Pakistan I'm provide to people smart Digital Education my main focus on which people they loved Technology and smart Digital Education 😉

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