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Bullet Holes

Extra Holes

By Gerard DiLeoPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Bullet Holes
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(For Poppy's January Challege

at https://todaysurvey.shop/writers/poppy-s-prompts%29%3C/p%3E%3C/blockquote%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="14azzlx-P">.css-14azzlx-P{font-family:Droid Serif,Georgia,Times New Roman,Times,serif;font-size:1.1875rem;-webkit-letter-spacing:0.01em;-moz-letter-spacing:0.01em;-ms-letter-spacing:0.01em;letter-spacing:0.01em;line-height:1.6;color:#1A1A1A;margin-top:32px;}

Bullet holes

Are extra,

Wholly holes —

Extra holes

Beyond which

Come standard –

Unnecessary, superfluous:

Neither hear

Nor speak

Nor see

Nor pee;

Don't love

Or interdigitate

Or lovingly

Consummate;

Or eliminate —

Just waste.

.

Make life

Leak out.

.

Unnecessary holes

Are extra

Ass holes.

We each

Only need

One.

The rest

Are just

Extra waste.

Stream of Consciousness

About the Creator

Gerard DiLeo

Retired, not tired. Hippocampus, behave!

Make me rich! https://www.amazon.com/Gerard-DiLeo/e/B00JE6LL2W/

My substrack at https://substack.com/@drdileo

[email protected]

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  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Wonderful piece. Nicely done.

  • Well done! "Don't love Or interdigitate Or lovingly Consummate; Or eliminate — Just waste." I'm learning all the time... had to check the definition of interdigitate!

  • This was so profound. Loved the last stanza the most!

  • Poppy 2 years ago

    You made the rhyming seem so effortless and smooth! A great take on the prompt. “We each Only need One.” Is my favourite part!

  • Daphsam2 years ago

    Well done!

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