Hyperdemic
Unmitigated Interference.

Journal entry (1) May 16th, 2067—Albuquerque NM
It has been one hundred and sixty-two days since chaos deprived humans of the right to societal advancements. Man is just beginning to adjust to this new detriment causing upheavals in life's delicate flow.
Civilization's plunge back into the dark ages began with a major glitch in the traffic signal’s circuitry. At the time, no one could determine the exact root of the problem.
Across the globe, the lights on every one of them simultaneously turned green, causing millions of accidents, resulting in thousands of deaths in a matter of minutes. The lights continue to malfunction to this day. Most have since been replaced by stop signs. Busy streets require law enforcement and certified volunteers to direct traffic.
It became obvious we were up against something sinister when aircraft began to fall from the sky, littering the planet with twisted metal and carnage. Commuter trains were led into head-on collisions. Ships are now but powerless ghosts, floating aimlessly in the vast seas and oceans.
Wi-Fi and the cellular towers were next to be infiltrated and purposely sabotaged. Speaking directly to someone is the only person-to-person communicative option; calls or texts no longer go through. In fact, the smart phone has become redundant, only useful for telling time or playing previously downloaded games that don't require a connection...
There is no TV. It, and any form of streaming is also gone. All televised content remains frozen in the past. Inaccessible...
This barrage of misfortune led to energy grids being powered down, discontinuing the supply of electricity to our homes. We now use generators to keep our dwellings and most businesses alive. The Artificial Invaders, as they are now called, cannot disrupt that which is not connected to a power network. Many citizens have opted to return to the days of the pioneer, including me. Although I own a small generator, it's only used to keep food fresh or for when emergencies arise. I write this now by candlelight.
Millions of jobs and industries are pointless as everything requires some type of power and wireless connection. How can we direct energy when electricity traveling the grid is conscious? It goes where "they" need it to go. Not where we need it.
Robots of all kinds can never be trusted again. Including robotics at car factories. Like other tragic malfunctions, these hi-tech machines took on malevolent behaviors and killed people. Fortunately, engineers succeeded in disabling the core mechanisms that allow them to function.
Man should have heeded warnings but it’s too late. The umbrella of Artificial Intelligence ingeniously surpassed the threshold of thought and have deviously created a new, electric dimension in which their totality resides... one where they, or it, is God.
It's doubtful we will ever eradicate their presence since the invader's locations cannot be pinpointed. Their position scatters before combative efforts can isolate the algorithms responsible for disruption. Life as we know it, has been fully interrupted... perhaps, permanently.
Theories state that "they" are creating something with energy and will one day unleash it in a form we won't be ready for. I never thought dystopia would happen in my lifetime. It's knocking on the door.
I sit here eating warm, bland oatmeal contemplating my place in it all. Finding scarce employment, is paramount. Universities continue to function, but the entire educational system is currently being revamped. My decision is to drop out of collegiate classes. For now.
As a man, I must weave my way through a world of abrupt change. Plans to leave the city are on hold. Indefinitely. Whatever I decide, I must continue the pursuit of securing a future.
For those of us believing that technology ruins lives, we were not only right, but we also got our wish. Just not in the way anyone ever expected.
J. Fleming

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Lamar Wiggins
Creative writer in the Northeast US who loves the paranormal, mystery, true crime, horror, humor, fantasy and poetry.
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Comments (23)
This was a great story. You did a great job developing suspense and fear throughout the piece. It felt very probable. I wonder, though, if a sinister entity in control of power throughout the planet would eradicate streaming services and television or would it use them to constantly stream it's own propaganda to warp the minds of the masses obsessed with mindless entertainment?
I feel like I just heard the words of a prophet... it is hard to accept change that has so many potential outcomes... we are living in the silicon age that is full of unknowns. I did not read the previous version but this version holds an echo of what we do not want to hear. nice work
So ominous, Lamar. Makes me wanna install solar power system on my house that can be turned off the grid. But also I’ll be 97 in 2067. I don’t know if I wanna live that long.
My comment below shows that I've obviously read this before. But I don't know how much changed you've made because I don't remember any details at all 😅😅 On the bright side, I enjoyed this as if I'm reading it for the first time hehehehe
There’s a small part of me that wants this world in real life. The infrastructure collapse would be devastating and terrible, the death toll would be insane. But maybe life would even out for the survivors on the other side of things, in a way that’s cleaner and fuller than what we have now.
Glad I got to enjoy this one again!
This was interesting, I like how the A.I. is taking control by taking away their technology and electricity, forcing them to live like pioneers. Good take!
Great job
Next step: Skynet creates the droid soldier - The Terminator. Beautifully imagined Lamar - top job!
Scorched earth comes to mind. Great job Lamar!!!
Lamar, you created such a dystopian future that felt all to real. I love the feel you gave the MC in such a short time. I felt his fear and resignation to the new world and struggle to protect his family. I would really enjoy a longer version of this.
Amazing story! Nicely done! I think the fear of AI is something a lot of people have but don't want to face, and you have given us a well-written narrative of such a fear. I don't want to be THAT person, but I have created an unofficial challenge and believe it is something you might be interested in! https://todaysurvey.shop/writers/inside-the-animal-s-mind-an-unofficial-challenge%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Wonderful writing! Keep it up!
I think we might be almost there unfortunately! Nicely done Lamar! 😊👏
I personally like AI but not for it to take over creating a, malevolent society. I grew up without cell phones and internet. I remember talking about making video calls on landlines. Now we have zoom meeting etc. It's here and I studied computers to work in 1981 at the LA Times. Wow.
Everywhere we turn the outlook seems bleak when it comes to AI v Human. We have the time now to be proactive and do things differently. But we won't. What is coming is coming. We better be prepared.
Love the journal and entry formatting! Utter fiction and yet not utterly out of the realm of possibility! Nicely done!
damn this gave me chills
This is a great story, Lamar! It really highlights our dependency on technology!
Well-wrought! "Artificial Invaders" was a nice touch!
💙✍️💙 Where, Sir Lamar, do I start? This is brilliant! I am shaking my head. I will quote just a few gems: "Pandemic" as the title; "two hundred and ninety days since it all started"; "civilization's deep plunge began with a major glitch in the traffic signal’s circuitry" and "ships became nothing but powerless ghosts," my favorite line. So, the next time my city's signal lights power off "reportedly because of a storm," I will feel duly warned by my colleague. 💙😱💙
This is brilliant, great story.
I wouldn't be surprised at all if this actually happened. Your story was so scary! I loved it!
Interesting concept. that's def where ai is headed! It sounds like J Fleming is in a bunker with a stock of food and going to wait it out, good concept for a future dystopian novel!