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Vocal Community Microfiction Series - Beat

By Loryne AndaweyPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
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"You really think you'll make it? With a voice like that?"

He laughed, and when the pain began to pour from her eyes he laughed even harder.

"Someday, when I'm rich and ballin', I'll come find you on the streets. Make you sing to me for a dollar. Then you'd wish I kept you around!"

She screamed at him then, but he was too flush with himself to have heard her.

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Years later, when he thought himself safe, he went to the deli.

Her songs taunted him through the radio.

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Loryne Andawey

Health, Happiness & Abundance.

Currently enjoying the company of Francis, Mike, C.H., Gammastack, Michelle, Cosimo, Kristen, Bronson, Bella, Talia, Sean, Babs, Kelli, Rick, Dharrsheena, Heather, Gina and many, many more!

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  • Joelle E N3 years ago

    Queen.

  • JBaz3 years ago

    Nice payback.

  • Ha! In his face!

  • Mariann Carroll3 years ago

    Wonderful story telling

  • Gotta love karma. She knows her stuff

  • Dana Stewart3 years ago

    Universe corrected the error. Well done.

  • Leslie Writes3 years ago

    Serves him right! 💖

  • One of my favorite famous singer stories was Lady Gaga retelling the story of the NYU teacher who told her her voice would never be good enough to sing a lead

  • 😱Omg, I live for this tale...💖😉👍

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    Oh, I love this! 😍 Karma is a B 😅

  • Dana Crandell3 years ago

    The sweet smell of success with a side of revenge. Nice!

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Outstanding!!! Left some love!!!💖💖💕

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Good for her. Well done.

  • Sweetest revenge is to prove them wrong.

  • J. S. Wade3 years ago

    Show em! Good read Loryne 🥰

  • I hope that happens! I hate bullies! Love the story! Good work!

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