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Raindrops and Stolen Glances

By: Imran Pisani

By Imran PisaniPublished about 20 hours ago 4 min read

The city smelled of wet asphalt and blooming jasmine. Raindrops tapped rhythmically against the café window where Mr. Goggles sat, scribbling in his notebook. He had been coming here for weeks, drawn by the aroma of strong coffee and the soft hum of jazz, but today was different. Today, she walked in.

Her hair was dark, glistening from the drizzle outside, and she wore a mustard-yellow coat that made her stand out against the grey city. Their eyes met for just a second before she looked away, but that second lingered in his chest like a melody he couldn’t forget.

He watched as she ordered her coffee, her voice gentle but confident, and found a seat across the room. His heart did that stupid flutter he always got when someone’s presence made the world shrink. He wanted to talk to her but didn’t know how to begin. Words seemed useless, yet he felt compelled to try.

Minutes passed, the café slowly filling with the soft chatter of strangers and the occasional clink of ceramic cups. He noticed her pull out a small notebook, scribbling something with a delicate pencil, and an irresistible curiosity rose in him. She wasn’t just beautiful; there was an intensity in her eyes, a story she carried like an invisible cloak.

Summoning courage, he walked over. “Hi,” he said, voice slightly too loud over the jazz. She looked up, startled, and he felt his confidence wobble.

“Hi,” she replied, a hint of a smile tugging at her lips.

“I couldn’t help but notice… we’re both… uh, writing?” He gestured to her notebook.

“Yes,” she said, her voice now steady, warm. “I guess you could say I’m… capturing thoughts before they run away.”

He chuckled. “Same here. I’m Mr. Goggles.” He held out a hand, awkward but sincere.

Her smile grew. “I’m Elara.”

They talked for hours, or maybe minutes—time became irrelevant. Words flowed like the rain outside, about books, music, dreams, the tiny details of life that somehow mattered most when shared with someone new. Every laugh, every glance felt electric. Mr. Goggles noticed the way her eyes crinkled when she smiled, how her fingers brushed hers accidentally, deliberately, leaving tiny sparks of connection in their wake.

Outside, the rain intensified, pattering against the glass in a soothing rhythm. Neither of them noticed the storm. A kind of quiet intimacy had settled around them, the café becoming their own little universe. Elara laughed at something he said—he didn’t remember what—and suddenly he realized he hadn’t felt this alive in years.

“You know,” she said, looking down at her notebook, “I never expected to meet anyone like this in a café. I usually sit and… observe, quietly. But today… today feels different.”

“Different is good,” he said, his eyes searching hers. “I’ve been waiting for different.”

A pause. The world seemed to hold its breath. Then, without warning, she reached across the table, brushing her hand against his. It was a small, fleeting touch, yet it sent a shiver up his spine.

“Do you… want to take a walk?” she asked, tilting her head, the rain a curtain beyond the window.

“Yes,” he said immediately. “I want that.”

They stepped out into the rain together, neither caring about getting wet. It felt freeing, like stepping into a world that existed only for the two of them. Raindrops clung to their hair and coats, glinting like tiny diamonds, and the city around them faded into a blur of light and sound.

Walking side by side, they talked about everything and nothing, laughing when their feet slipped on slick pavement, pausing when a puddle reflected the glow of a streetlamp. At some point, without a word, their hands met, fingers intertwining naturally, as though they had always belonged together.

“You’re warm,” she said softly, resting her head on his shoulder for just a moment.

“So are you,” he replied, his heart hammering in his chest. “I don’t know why, but I feel like I’ve known you forever.”

She smiled, and that smile—bright, honest, full of life—made him feel like he had finally found the missing part of himself.

They wandered aimlessly, discovering tiny corners of the city they’d never noticed: an old bookstore tucked between two buildings, the scent of vanilla and old pages wafting out as they peeked inside; a street musician playing a violin, his music weaving through the rain-soaked streets; a hidden fountain where the water shimmered under the lamplight. Each moment was a discovery, a memory stitched into the tapestry of something neither of them fully understood yet but couldn’t deny.

Eventually, they found themselves at a small park, the grass slick with rain, leaves glistening with moisture. They sat on a bench, dripping and laughing, their breaths mingling in the cool night air.

“I don’t want tonight to end,” Elara whispered.

“It doesn’t have to,” he said, surprising even himself with the conviction in his voice. “We can keep walking, keep talking… keep discovering.”

Her hand tightened around his, and he felt that same spark, the same impossible sense of belonging. “I’d like that,” she said.

For hours, they stayed there, sharing secrets, fears, dreams, and silly stories that made them laugh until tears streaked their faces. The city around them was alive, but they were in a bubble of warmth, rain, and stolen glances. Every laugh, every touch, every heartbeat was a promise, unspoken but understood.

As the night deepened and the rain softened to a gentle drizzle, Mr. Goggles realized something profound: love wasn’t about grand gestures or perfect timing. It was about moments like this—raw, unplanned, drenched in rain and full of wonder.

Finally, as the first hints of dawn colored the sky, Elara looked at him with eyes shining brighter than the rising sun. “I don’t want this to be a story that ends,” she said.

“It won’t,” he replied, leaning close, brushing a wet strand of hair from her face. “This… us… it’s just the beginning.”

And in that quiet, rain-kissed morning, their lips met, gentle but certain, sealing a promise that felt as old as time yet new in every heartbeat. Around them, the city woke slowly, unaware that in a small corner, under the lingering rain, two hearts had found a rhythm they would follow forever.

Love

About the Creator

Imran Pisani

Hey, welcome. I write sharp, honest stories that entertain, challenge ideas, and push boundaries. If you’re here for stories with purpose and impact, you’re in the right place. I hope you enjoy!

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