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The Golden Chef

Can one bowl change a life? In noodle we trust.

By Eloise Robertson Published about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - August 2024

That night feels like a lifetime ago. I remember my skin slick from the rain like oil suffocating me, burning my eyes, soaking into my pores. I was a walking natural disaster - the moment the dirt feels soft underfoot before the landslide, or the ripple of water before the earthquake tears a building asunder.

The sickly glow of the neon sign drew my attention to the silhouette of the food cart with only a small striped umbrella as protection from the onslaught of the storm. I see now that it was a lifeline reaching out to me in the darkness, a distraction from the gun burning a hole through my inner jacket pocket, knocking against the metal cross hanging around my neck.

“Good evening, sir,” the stout cook said. “Chef’s special noodles with the lot?”

The cart was set up in the most dangerous part of town; there was no such thing as a good evening. I grumbled some sort of agreement. He gazed lovingly at the swirls of fragrant steam billowing from the bowl before he turned his hypnotic golden eye to me.

“Patience brings joy. Take your time.”

I'm not sure what I ate, I was so enraptured it didn't matter. He had a power to create something so perfect I forgot everything else. It was nothing short of a miracle, or magic; no mere man could create this.

The next night, he was gone. I never thanked the hero who met me at a crossroads and redirected my life with the best meal I will ever eat. I've only heard him referred to as The Golden Chef. I’ve heard stories about him since, he's never where people want him to be, but exactly where he needs to be. I wonder if I was the first?

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About the Creator

Eloise Robertson

I pull my ideas randomly out of thin air and they materialise on a page. Some may call me a magician.

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    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Testabout a year ago

    Lovely tale!

  • Katherine D. Grahamabout a year ago

    loved the tale you wrote.. congratulations on top story

  • Addison Alderabout a year ago

    There's never a bad time for noodles! I love this, evocative, mysterious and mouthwatering. Well done on the TS 🙏😁 Also for some reason it reminded me of the old joke... A Buddhist monk goes to a hot dog vendor: "Make me one with everything." The vendor smiles and and does so. "That'll be $9.” The monk gives him a $10 bill and the vendor pockets it. "What about my change?" asks the monk. "Change comes from within."

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Wonderful micro fiction! Congratulations on Top Story, too!

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    Congratulations on TS! This is a great short story, and I want a meal from the "Golden chef."

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