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The Paradise Experiment

Don't Know What You Got

By C. H. RichardPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
The Paradise Experiment
Photo by Trent Haaland on Unsplash

Rudy was never one to complain, but he was not sure the one hundred dollar gift card to Billy Bob's Burgers was worth the side effects of a medication he was taking for this clinical trial. The itchiness in his feet from the growing roots was very uncomfortable.

"It is hard to wear a jacket!" He pointed to the branch growing from his side.

The research assistant listened and nodded while texting Dr Mitchell,

"We have another!"

Dr Mitchell smiled looking out at the arborway that used to be a parking lot. The big yellow taxi drove away.

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C. H. Richard

My passion is and has always been writing. I am particularly drawn to writing fiction that has relatable storylines which hopefully keep readers engaged

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  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Haha. That is so cool.

  • Lamar Wiggins3 years ago

    Well, that was awesome! I see you've been doing your mental exercises because that was deeply clever! 💖

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    I just went from one ear worm to another, but I always loved this song!! This was really quite clever. I loved it!

  • J. S. Wade3 years ago

    Ooooo. Great story. You’re done, man, Just breathe Rudy! 🤣 well, until you wonder “Who Let the Dogs Out.”

  • C.H. those roots and branches were stunning details and no Rudy, the gift card was NOT worth it!!!😩

  • Oh soooo good

  • Donna Renee3 years ago

    Oh I love this!!! 👏👏 Although the song will seem a bit different to me now haha

  • JBaz3 years ago

    Big yellow taxi....nice, real nice

  • Sandra Tena3 years ago

    Brilliant and eerie, loved it! x

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Fabulous!!! Loving it!!!💖💖💕

  • O, Cindy, Cindy, Cindy. How could you leave me out "with" a limb like that? Clever. Very clever.

  • Whoaaa, this was so brilliant!

  • An interesting arboreal twist, excellent work

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    Clever!! I love this, Cindy!!

  • Tiffany Gordon3 years ago

    Another winner! Awesome work Cindy!

  • Dana Stewart3 years ago

    This is great and I love that song. I’ll always think of you now when I hear it. Great job, Cindy!

  • Leslie Writes3 years ago

    Woah. I love what you did here :)

  • ARC3 years ago

    Wow this is clever. Well done, Cindy!! 👏

  • Don't it always seem to go? Great story

  • Dana Crandell3 years ago

    You know I'm never again going to be able to listen to the song without thinking about this, right? 🤣 Great job!

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