The secret key
They were teleported to Ancient Earth
A Drabble
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The document, encased in glass, revealed faded ink and broken edges. In the excavation tent, the archaelogists stared at the symbols with curiosity.
“Can you translate it?” Lucy Donovan’s assistant, Jonathan, asked as if he were afraid to disturb the ancient artifact.
“No need for that,” Lucy claimed whilst pressing her palm onto the glass.
Suddenly, the world shifted.
The tent vanished, replaced by an alien-looking stone chamber; a voice boomed in her mind: “The Keeper returns.”
Jonathan’s breath stopped for a second.
“This wasn’t a document. It was a key,” said Lucy showing a triumphant Cheshire Cat's grin.
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Susan Fourtané
Susan Fourtané is a Science and Technology Journalist, a professional writer with over 18 years experience writing for global media and industry publications. She's a member of the ABSW, WFSJ, Society of Authors, and London Press Club.
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Comments (7)
Nice Drabble. A great form to write
This was pretty amazing Susan how you were able to make the earth move in exactly 100 words. Excellent and crafty writing.
I like the mention of the Cheshire Cat, and the idea of touching the glass and the world shifting, then hearing the whisper from the keeper — it was spooky mysterious, magical and captivating. Congratulations on your 3rd place win under most subscribed to creators on the leaderboard this week 🎉🎊🎉
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Oooo, Lucy is so smart. Loved your story!
The suspense and vivid imagery pulled me right in. Can't wait to read more of your captivating stories. If you have a moment, I'd be thrilled if you could check out my latest stories and share your thoughts. Your feedback would mean a lot to me.
Excellent! An intriguing start to something bigger?