He wolf whistled, at the stunning creature which gracefully flew past him. The delicateness of her wings, transparent enough to show off the gentle curves of her body beneath them, had tantalised his senses. The sensual purring sound they made as they flapped around, strangely stirred something within him.
Eight watchful eyes popped out at the sight of her beauty., she looked so luscious with her glorious electric blue coat, covering her curves, glistening in the sunlight, while she glided gracefully around his garden.
Aware she had caught his gaze, she turned in flight, back towards him, her eyes now intently upon him as she flew. As he stared back at her, he captured huge scarlet eyes; the most beautiful eyes that he had ever seen.
“Well hello there” his voice was soft, barely a whisper, but loud enough for her to hear, as she approached closer to him. Stopping in mid air, she hovered at his side, all the while, gazing into his dark smouldering eyes.
She spotted a ledge and perched herself onto it. What looked and felt silky was surprisingly strangely adhesive, as her feet seemed to slightly stick to it’s surface. She positioned herself comfortably, trying not to lose her balance, as she steadied herself from toppling off, becoming aware that it’s stickiness would most probably stop her from doing so anyway.
She blushed as she caught his gaze on her, mesmerising her with those beautiful dark eyes he seemed to possess.
Her large blood eyes captured many images of his hypnotic ones, as she became aware of herself drowning into them, unable to avert her eyes from his.
Composing herself, she steadied her breath, she didn’t want him to think he was making her nervous, so she confidently held herself serenely.
Now closer, he noticed how long her slim tapering legs were, how very demure she looked, completely taking his breath away.
Her translucent wings cascaded around her, like enormous soft veils wrapped provocatively around her body, he just couldn’t take his eyes off her.
“Hello to you too...” she replied, in a slow, slightly flirty sexy voice. “Hope you are well?” she asked
“I am now, all the better for seeing you!” he answered, huskily.
And with that, she gave a cute, coquettish giggle, as she slowly prised herself off the ledge and flew off, coyly looking back at him before disappearing over the bushes.
~
The following day he was awoken by the familiar purring he had heard the previous day. He swiftly got up and silently glided over to where the sound was.
It was her, had she come back to see him? He certainly hoped so.
He watched her dance erotically around him in the air, sensually flirting with her crystalline wings, the sunlight captured the intensity of the soft sheen of her body. Just like the sun reflecting light onto a calm deep blue sea.
“Come to dinner” he flirted as he watched her blush. “I’ll prepare it, here at mine, same time tomorrow. I’d so love to have your company here, for dinner...”
“I’d love to!” she answered excitedly as she ruffled her sparkling wings, sexily taunting him aware that her flirtatiousness was having an effect on him.
~
As he excitedly got ready for his date, he opened his cupboard to reveal six perfectly polished emerald green shoes. The shoes he wore for special occasions.
One by one, he slid them on and held up each black leg, proudly admiring each of his now brightly shining feet.
He fixed his smart red bowtie, with his white leather gloved hands, which he also adorned and pulled out his matching red top hat and perched it firmly on his head. He sat patiently waiting, until he heard the familiar sound of her magnificent purr.
Slowly, he crept across his web to where the sound was. His heart leapt at the sight of her, barely recognising the sight which hovered before him, completely taking his breath away.
Wearing a lacy black basque, showing off her voluptuous curves, it was fastened securely with ruby coloured ribbons which matched her huge ruby come to bed eyes, which were now framed by long luxurious dark lashes.
Six patent leather scarlet shoes with killer heels adorned her feet, which made her slim sensual legs look even longer.
She vivaciously tantalised him as she flew closer around him, he felt the breeze from her glistening wings brush against his dark body, gently ruffling his hairs.
“Dinner won’t be long.” He informed her, as he continued to gaze longingly at her.
“What are we having?” as she licked her lips in anticipation, as hunger was now beginning to ascend upon her.
“Soup!” he declared, as he reached across from behind and pulled out the dinner he had prepared earlier, something he’d been lucky to catch that morning, wrapped up securely within his carefully prepared silk.
She wasn’t sure what the dinner he had prepared actually was, but it certainly looked very appetising.
“But first...” he moved towards her, wrapping his front legs around her, he gently pulled her close.
She caught her breath as she stared into his enormous mesmerising eyes. Legs like jelly, she wasn’t sure if it was hunger which made her feel suddenly so weak, as she hadn’t eaten all day, or the effects of his hypnotic stare?
Gripping her tightly, his face moved closer towards hers, her heart raced as she closed her eyes as he planted a soft kiss on her lips. He then slowly motioned his head over to her side to gently kiss her neck.
Stopping briefly, she opened her eyes to let him kiss her properly, when suddenly she caught sight of two large fangs. In that moment, they had startled her, when rapidly, he bore down and punctured her neck with them.
She let out a scream unsure in what was happening as naively unbeknown to her, she was dessert!
The End
About the Creator
Hazel Rymell
..Suddenly I crash back down to earth with a big almighty bump!
...when not in a dolly daydream, creative me is at home in the UK doing the normal everyday mundane jobs, that seem to go on forever...until the daydreaming kicks in again...
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