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The Twelve-Mile Home

He spent four hours a day traveling to a life he loved. Then a transit strike forced him to walk, and he found one twelve miles closer.

By HabibullahPublished 3 months ago 3 min read

For a decade, Leo’s life had been a study in motion. His identity was “super-commuter.” He lived in a neighbourhood called Oakwood, but his life was in the gleaming city center, twelve miles and two train rides away. His days were a blur of platforms, noise-canceling headphones, and the hypnotic rhythm of tracks. Oakwood was just the place where his apartment stored his stuff while he was gone.

Then, the transit strike hit. Total gridlock. No trains, no buses. After a futile hour trying to hail a ride-share, Leo faced a horrifying prospect: he would have to walk.

The first mile was pure frustration. His leather-soled dress shoes were not made for this. He cursed the unions, the city, his own bad luck. He marched past the same bland chain stores and parking garages he always sped by, his head down, his pace furious.

But around mile three, his anger began to drain, replaced by a strange, creeping awareness. He had to slow down. And as he did, his surroundings began to change. The sterile commercial strip gave way to rows of old brownstones. He noticed a café he’d never seen, with a little terrier sleeping in the sun outside. The smell of fresh bread and coffee, not from a global chain, but from a place called “Marta’s,” wafted into the street.

Hesitantly, he went in. He bought a croissant. It was the best he’d ever had. The barista, a woman with a kind smile and a tattoo of a sparrow on her wrist, knew her customers by name. They weren't just transactions; they were neighbours.

Fueled by buttery, flaky pastry, Leo kept walking. He turned down a side street to avoid traffic and found himself in a different world. It was a narrow lane strung with fairy lights, housing a tiny, independent bookshop, a store that sold only vinyl records, and a small gallery displaying vibrant local art. He saw people. They were talking, laughing, walking dogs, sitting on their stoops. They weren't rushing. They were living.

He saw a park—a real one, with ancient oak trees and a pond with ducks—that was only two blocks from his apartment building. For ten years, he had no idea it was there.

A man about his age was flying a kite with his daughter. He waved at Leo. “Beautiful evening for a walk!”

Leo, startled, waved back. “Yeah… it is.”

He kept walking, but now he was a tourist in his own life. He saw the community bulletin board plastered with flyers for a pottery class, a jazz concert in the very park he’d just passed, a lost cat named Mittens. He saw the faces of the people who lived around him. The elderly man tending a stunning rose garden in a tiny patch of earth. The group of friends playing chess at a fold-out table on the sidewalk.

He had spent a decade believing his life was somewhere else. He had been paying a premium to sleep in a waiting room, desperate to catch the next train to his "real" existence.

The final mile felt different. His feet ached, but his mind was clear. He arrived at the door of his apartment building and looked up at it. It wasn't just a storage unit anymore. It was his home, nestled in a community he had been too busy to see.

He didn't go straight inside. He walked to the little park and sat on a bench, watching the ducks until the sun dipped below the rooftops.

The next day, the transit strike was still on. Leo put on his most comfortable shoes. He walked to Marta’s for coffee. He said hello to the barista with the sparrow tattoo. He bought a newspaper from the corner stand and actually read it on a park bench.

When the trains finally started running again a week later, Leo still took them to work. But something had changed. He no longer sprinted from the station, eyes glued to his phone. Now, he walked. He noticed the seasons changing in the trees he passed. He learned the names of a few shopkeepers. He signed up for the pottery class.

The twelve-mile journey to the city no longer felt like his real life. It was just a commute. His life, he had discovered, was right here, in the twelve-mile radius he had spent a decade running through. He hadn't been stranded by the strike. He had been found.

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Habibullah

Storyteller of worlds seen & unseen ✨ From real-life moments to pure imagination, I share tales that spark thought, wonder, and smiles daily

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