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The Gravity Well

And All That We Held Down

By Danyal HashmiPublished 6 months ago 7 min read
The Gravity Well
Photo by Poul Cariov on Unsplash

The first sign was the birds.

Elara noticed it one still morning in late September, sipping lukewarm coffee on the back porch. The sky was a faultless blue, but the starlings weren’t flying in their usual chaotic murmurations. Instead, they swirled in a tight, silent, clockwise circle over the far north forty, a living vortex against the dawn. It was beautiful, and it was wrong. She mentioned it to her husband, Thom, over eggs. He’d shrugged, chewing. “Weird wind current. Maybe a thermal.”

But there was no wind.

The next day, the circle was smaller, tighter. By the week’s end, the birds were gone. In their place was a faint, shimmering haze in the air, a lens of distorted light above the fallow strip where Thom had planned to plant winter wheat. He drove the ATV out to investigate and came back pale, his hands smeared with dirt that wouldn’t brush off.

“It’s a hole,” he said, washing his hands at the kitchen sink with frantic, useless scrubs. The fine, black dust clung to his pores, his cuticles. “Just a hole. Three feet across. Perfectly round. Looks… bottomless.”

The scientists came from the state university, then from farther afield. They erected a perimeter of fluttering caution tape that seemed laughably inadequate. They brought instruments that whirred and beeped. They confirmed it was a hole. A pit. Not a sinkhole; the earth around its rim was stable, hard-packed clay. It was just an aperture, a three-foot-wide circle of perfect, non-reflective blackness. It didn't just look dark; it looked like a hole punched through the very concept of light.

Their initial reports whispered of a “localized gravitational anomaly.” Faint, they said. Curious.

The anomaly grew.

First, it was the dust. The topsoil at the edge of the pit began to tremble, individual grains levitating in a slow, stately dance before being sucked into the silence. Then leaves, caught in an invisible current, began to orbit the pit in a graceful, accelerating spiral before vanishing. The scientists, now wearing hazard suits, pushed their perimeter back another hundred yards. Their faces, when we could see them through their visors, were no longer curious. They were grim.

The first life claimed was a field mouse. Elara and the children—Liam, ten, and Maya, seven—watched from the designated “safe zone” as the small creature, squeaking in terror, was plucked from the ground mid-scamper. It didn’t fall in; it *orbited*, a fuzzy little moon for a black star, completing three perfect, horrifying loops before it was extinguished without a sound.

That was the day the dread took root in Elara’s stomach, cold and heavy. This was no longer a curiosity. It was a predator. A silent, patient, and utterly impersonal one.

Thom tried to be pragmatic. “They’ll figure it out. They have to.” But his eyes followed the now-constant stream of leaves and dust spiraling into the void. The government men arrived, their suits darker, their badges shinier. They talked about “containment” and “controlled demolition,” but their voices lacked conviction. How do you demolish a hole?

The pull increased.

The family dog, a old, loyal border collie named Jess, refused to go outside. She whined at the door, her body trembling. One evening, a stray cat yowled past the kitchen window, its legs churning frantically against the air as it was dragged, backwards, toward the north forty. It disappeared into the black disc, its final cry severed like a clipped wire.

Evacuation was no longer a suggestion; it was an order. They packed a single suitcase each, the act feeling surreal. What do you take when you’re fleeing not a fire or a flood, but a silent, growing hunger in the earth itself? Liam packed his favorite baseball glove. Maya clutched a ragged stuffed unicorn. Thom took the deeds to the land and his father’s pocket watch. Elara took a photo album, her hands shaking so badly she nearly dropped it.

They moved into a cramped FEMA trailer ten miles away, on a ridge overlooking the valley that held their life. The government had cordoned off a five-mile radius. News helicopters circled like nervous dragonflies, their camera lenses zooming in on the farm.

From the ridge, they watched the death of their world in slow motion.

The pull was strong enough now to affect larger objects. Their red barn, a century-old landmark, was the first big structure to go. It didn’t collapse. It *unraveled*. First, the weathervane tore free, spinning away into the vortex. Then shingles followed in a continuous stream, like scales being plucked from a fish. Then entire sheets of roofing, the beams groaning in protest before splintering and flying inward. The walls bowed, then disintegrated into a stream of planks and nails. In less than a day, the barn was gone, consumed piecemeal into the perfect black circle. It was death by dissection.

The well’s event horizon was invisible, but its effects painted its boundaries in the air. A perpetual tornado of debris now surrounded it—soil, splintered wood, the mangled remains of their tractor, all of it swirling in a furious, silent ballet before being devoured. The sound was the worst part. It wasn’t a roar. It was a low, sub-audible hum that vibrated in their teeth and bones, a note of pure, ravenous gravity.

The farmhouse was next. It was the children’s home. The place where Elara had rocked them to sleep, where Thom had fixed squeaky floorboards, where Christmases had been celebrated. It stood no chance.

It started with the porch. The swing tore away, then the steps, then the entire structure, the wood screaming as it was pulled from its foundations. The windows blew out inward, the glass disappearing in a glittering cloud. The walls groaned, leaning toward the north forty. For a terrifying moment, the whole house seemed to hold its shape, resisting the pull. Then, with a shudder they felt through the ground even on the ridge, the foundation gave way. The house did not fall over. It was *dismantled*. It came apart into its constituent parts—clapboards, window frames, furniture, their wedding china, Liam’s bed, Maya’s drawings—all of it pulled into the ever-accelerating vortex of debris.

Thom sank to his knees, a raw, broken sound escaping his throat. Elara held the children, pressing their faces into her jacket so they wouldn’t have to see the place of their birth and memories being erased from existence.

The well was not satisfied. Its appetite was infinite.

The five-mile radius became ten. The town of Millersburg, population 2,300, began to die. The church spire was the first to go, bending like a reed before snapping and spinning away. Then the roofs of the Main Street shops peeled off. Cars slid down the streets, empty, gathering speed before lifting into the air and joining the stream. The evacuation became a panicked rout, but it was too late for some. The Pull was now a physical force, a gale that ripped trees from the ground and tore asphalt from the roads, all of it funneling towards that silent, black mouth.

From their ridge, the family watched the end of their geography. The familiar landscape of hills and fields was being scoured clean, the soil itself peeling away in great sheets to reveal the pale, naked bedrock beneath. The vortex in the sky was now a column of destruction a mile wide, a roaring cataract of everything that was, fed by the land itself. The hum was a physical pressure, a weight on their chests.

And at the center of it all, unmoved, unchanged, was the Well. The original three-foot circle of blackness. It hadn’t widened a single inch. It didn’t need to. It was just a hole. A drain. And the universe, on this tiny, insignificant point, was emptying.

Liam, his voice small against the world-ending noise, asked, “Will it stop?”

Elara had no answer. She looked at Thom, whose face was a mask of stunned, absolute defeat. The deeds to the land in his pocket were worthless. His father’s watch was gone. Everything they had built, loved, and held down was being pulled into the void.

This was the true horror. Not the destruction, but the *impartiality* of it. The Well didn’t hate them. It didn’t even notice them. It was simply a law of physics, a negative space that needed filling. Their lives, their love, their history—it was all just mass. Just matter to be consumed. They were witnesses to their own utter irrelevance in a cosmos that could casually birth such a thing in a farmer’s field.

They held each other as the ridge beneath their feet began to tremble. The Pull was here, too, now. The FEMA trailers around them were creaking, their metal skins straining. The emergency lights flickered and died. In the distance, the last of Millersburg was gone, and the bedrock itself was cracking, great continental plates of stone fracturing and lifting into the maelstrom.

Elara pulled her children close, making her body a shield against the inevitable. She looked past the terrifying, magnificent spectacle of the collapsing world, past the column of debris that now touched the clouds, and fixed her eyes on the center.

On the Well.

The small, seemingly bottomless pit. The three-foot-wide circle of perfect blackness. It was the most terrifying thing she had ever seen because it was nothing. It was a zero. And it was hungry for everything.

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