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Dancing in the Downpour

By Amanda StarksPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
2:22 AM
Photo by Zach Reiner on Unsplash

The bones are tired,

but the will is strong -

unbending like the mountain

who stood witness to millions of sunrises

promised to a wuthering sky.

Lightning cracks,

but rain smooths away the damage,

a refreshing dip into the tears of angels.

Oh, how I love the rain!

To feel alive beneath its fall

is a gift toward my rise -

ascension of an indomitable will

born of wars fought in darkness,

only now just seeing the beauty

of the sinking suns.

Night beckons sleep,

but dreams beckon curiosity -

the creative soul

of one whose tired bones

have found joy dancing

in the downpour.

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This was just entered into the Happiness and Light Unofficial Challenge! Let's see how it does! - 11/25/2025

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Amanda Starks

Fantasy writer, poet, and hopefully soon-to-be novelist who wants to create safe spaces to talk about mental health. Subscribe to my free newsletter at www.amandastarks.com for updates!

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  • Paul Stewart2 months ago

    Just to let you know - https://todaysurvey.shop/writers/happiness-and-light-unofficial-challenge-the-results%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}

  • Paul Stewart2 months ago

    Well anyone who knows me well will know that I am a pluviophile through and through. I could smell the petrichor and tension lift reading this. Sublime and inspirational. Thank you Amanda lassie for entering. I am now reading the entries and trying to catch up with John. Which means we should have the results this week. Loved this though

  • A lovely take on the challenge, especially “ Night beckons sleep, but dreams beckon curiosity - the creative soul of one whose tired bones have found joy dancing in the downpour.”💖

  • John Cox2 months ago

    This is quite inspirational! Loved it.

  • Belle2 years ago

    Astounding. Your imagery is so compelling!! [4/5]

  • Ian Read2 years ago

    I LOVE IT

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