I WISH we'd meet in heavens bright,
Where stars don't fade and days don't fight.
We'll dance through skies, hand in hand,
On softest clouds, where DREAMS expand.
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I WISH we'd meet beyond the rain,
Where peace is found and ends all pain.
The world below could FADE away,
But in that place, we'd always stay.
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I WISH we'd meet in hearts so pure,
Where love is endless, always sure.
No SORROW here, no TEAR, no DOUBT,
Just heaven's peace, all around about.
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I WISH we'd meet in timeless light,
Where day and night both feel just right.
And there we'd be, just YOU and ME,
In heaven’s glow, forever free.
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One day, we'll find that sacred place,
Where LOVE transcends time and space.
But until then, I'll hold this PRAYER,
That one day, we’ll meet—waiting there.
About the Creator
Komal
I write poems and stories that hit the feels.
When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.
𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋
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The Light Turns
It's Tuesday 7:13 a.m. A cold and clear November morning awaits Ray on his morning commute. Ray rubs his hands together in the front seat of his Subaru. He turns the air temperature up, but keeps the air on low until the air warms up. He looks at the backup camera screen and reverses the Subaru out of his driveway onto Trimble Road.
By John R. Godwinabout 17 hours ago in Fiction
Comments (23)
Absolutely a warm and tender one ❤❤ A big and cheerful Congratulations on making it to a 100 stories, Komal 💖😍 You'll do a 100 in no time, and soon a 1000. Insha Allah 💖 Keep writing; you're doing a fantastic job ✨🎊
nice poetic way of meeting
Sweet!
Loved your poem especially these lines: "I WISH we'd meet beyond the rain, Where peace is found and ends all pain." Beautifully written, Komal~ Thanks for sharing this 🥰
So dreamy and hopeful, infused with strength and determination 🥹💙 Gorgeously done, Komal! Just stunning!
when we go with the dream of peace At the same time, we need the force to keep it safe
This poem feels like a gentle embrace of peace and longing.
Still thinking about this.... May All Your Wishes Come True.
Wow this was majestic
This gave me the vibes of the beginning of a magical fairytale! Such remarkable beauty!
You are a unique force. I enjoy not just your poetry but the way you present it (your formatting style.) Blessings to You & Yours. ⚡💙⚡
Ooooh wow! This is stunning. The photo is powerful by itself but then the words in conjunction with it all really are mesmerizing and beautiful! Thank you for sharing this with us!
OH my this is stunning. Your opening line is wonderful, I love something that pulls me in like that. Then as we read you give us this: 'I WISH we'd meet in timeless light, Where day and night both feel just right.' Beautiful
Unbelievably beautiful!
Delightfully gentle and hopeful 💖.
This is simply beautiful. Well done.
Such a beautiful poem, komal <3
A poem full of heart and sacredness
Beautiful poem. Perfectly sculpted.
This is so beautiful and lovely!
I wish that day to be tomorrow, or even today...so lovely. Would we be happy in a perfectly perfect world though...would we become bored.. HMMM! Love the sentiments.
Gorgeous & Majestic! Beautiful work KoKo!
And I wish that this beautiful wish comes true. The repetition has such a beautiful effect in this! And I love the calm too.