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AI Apples Oranges Daisies in my Comments

Vocal's issue with AI comments

By Minte StaraPublished 8 months ago 2 min read
AI Apples Oranges Daisies in my Comments
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My comments leopards fish dreams are full of AI.

It is kittens Winter and leaves fairly obvious.

I imagine pineapple octopus queens so are yours;

if you green jump sleep check and see.

No real honey hare hope humans behind the machine.

At least flip flop flap not with any substance.

Take your work quirk piecemeal writing and read it

with algorithms drape wet linen and code.

What to grief plead anger do about this,

what to wonder head gift say to make it matter?

Write a letter union institution poem which humans

can see dance herd please and read.

Make a laugh jibe rib mockery of the whole thing.

Maybe if unicorn unique unusual switched the pattern.

Open flapping flies can you egret question wiggle

understand the pattern?

Yellow yaks yapping I bet you jagged jig jail

might struggle a bit window widow whisper

but it sings a song you cannot life liberty leadership

unsee once you learn it.

Magpies mumbling molder let the AI star sun sea

rot and wonder open access journal

what the words I am saying kin corn canaries

mean. It doesn't harbor haven home

matter to my ribbon rake radiator to my creativity.

So once again, let's try this pattern finger food and fire

But let's add things in, that make it seem princes, thieves and kings,

that I am speaking norm-fox, fairy, sire-ally.

All around the words do go, a dip, a slip, a laughter,

what sense you make earthquake and milkshake and flotsam is splintered with my (rafter, roofing and installation work can be very hard on the back) random.

Trust and integrity (my ass: an insult used when stating something is untrue) of comments

Are all paid advertisement (This YouTube Video is Sponsored by Maraud: Shade Fable!)

in their profiles. By god! (Here, listeners, the artist exclaims

to a deity out of despair, but does not specify which one. Debate in the comments.)

You think I'll klick dat?

It kan ne keen whot 'm saying, why wood I klick da link? Imma not daft!

And all those other things, which goodness don't you understand

makes me sick to this whole thing.

Can someone do something,

We may cry, as if we could be heard (Heard: defined as the ability to hear something,

implying anyone is actually their to listen.)

to take care of these awful things!

So 'read' this poem, if you can, and leave your comments simple.

I'm not writing for your 'eyes,' or to cause a smile.

If this is the only stanza you get,

the only one you trust.

Know this and only this 'my friend':

You aren't worth my dust.

And if you a human be,

Enjoy my fancy dance

Apples Oranges Daises

For them you'll understand.

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About the Creator

Minte Stara

Small writer and artist who spends a lot of their time stuck in books, the past, and probably a library.

Currently I'm working on my debut novel What's Normal Here, a historical/fantasy romance.

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  • Amanda Starks8 months ago

    Hahaha, oh my gosh this is both playful and spiteful, and I love how you hid the true poem within the nonsense, which is quite the literal representation of what it's like nowadays trying to find authentic art in the pile of AI slop. It took a few tries to find the right phrases, but it felt like a puzzle and a practice run for my brain to spot nonsensical AI work xD. This is amazing and severely underrated, Mint!! <3

  • Ah a "live" one. I must say, if this only gets comments about this being a jumbled mess, then it simply proves my point.

  • Jim Ellison8 months ago

    This is a bit of a jumbled mess. You might want to clarify your thoughts and organize them better. It's hard to follow what you're trying to say about AI and all this other stuff.

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