Sell my belongings
on the front lawn
I don’t need them
anymore
~
Let the wind blow
the rest away
~
All I need is your hand
and a dance
where we never
look away
~
Romance
Sonnets
Shakespeare in love
Poe and Annabelle Lee
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You
Me
Forever
Together
~
Is
All that matters
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The Light Turns
It's Tuesday 7:13 a.m. A cold and clear November morning awaits Ray on his morning commute. Ray rubs his hands together in the front seat of his Subaru. He turns the air temperature up, but keeps the air on low until the air warms up. He looks at the backup camera screen and reverses the Subaru out of his driveway onto Trimble Road.
By John R. Godwin2 days ago in Fiction
Comments (17)
This is a beautiful piece. Well done.
What a delightful poem💝. I especially liked: “Let the wind blow the rest away”✅.
Awww, that was so sweet. Loved your poem!
and our hearts swell once again at your bidding....unbelievably and breathtakingly beautiful
You - Me- Forever- Together - That says it all doesn't it. Nicely Done!!!
Oh, you fooled me for a second, I thought this was a breakup poem when he was giving his stuff away. This was stunning. So beautiful.
This is a winner! Good Luck! It says a lot about this love relationship.
Awesome love poem!!! Loving it!!!
Love this . Great work.
All I need is your hand and a dance, -Absolutely Beautiful. Well Done!!
I love this Will, it's so devote and simple!! Just elegant!!
Romantic & gorgeously-crafted! Go TIW Go! 🎉
Amazing ♦️🖊️♦️♦️♦️
Wow, Will, I see the fight that led to the belongings being put on the front lawn and him proclaiming his love to her instead of his stuff. You painted such a picture in so few words <3
This is so soft and dreamy, like a love story floating on the wind! The simplicity makes it even more powerful—just love, no distractions. That last stanza? Perfection.
-let the wind blow the rest away- love the meaning behind that visual. Materials don’t compare to what really matters. Lovely work, Will.
Surely this is a winner. Damn sir, this is just. So. Damn. Good. In awe right now. It looks like it's less than 50, the way you've formatted it, which makes it even more incredible. Such a beautiful economy of words where every single syllable is holding its own. Well done, Will!