Born to light, she fell,
Crushed by hands that fear the stars—
Peace can't bloom on earth~
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💞Can't we just all find peace & love for once💞
Storyline- This angelic being of light was put on earth, but her thoughts of peace and love were betrayed. Indicating there is a never-ending war.
About the Creator
Kodah
- Storyteller, Love/Romance, Dark, Surrealism, Psychological, Nature, Mythical, Whimsical
~𝓢𝓽𝓸𝓻𝓲𝓮𝓼 𝓬𝓪𝓷 𝓫𝓮 𝓪 𝓵𝓲𝓽𝓽𝓵𝓮 𝓭𝓮𝓮𝓹~
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Off the Book
It ended like every other stupid idea. Badly, and alone. I’m researching digital confession ethics, he said. A tech ethicist. He gestured at floating data I couldn’t see then pulled out a physical notebook. Actual paper, fountain pen. He held it up like he was showing me scripture.
By Nicky Frankly5 days ago in Fiction
Comments (9)
Universal love and peace… a beautiful dream… yet out of reach. Such a beautiful powerful poem in so few words! Exceptional work!
Oh my, that's powerful. I simply love that second line, sad as it is.
Angelic being, please don't give up on us humans!
Heyyyy Kodah! My commenting ability was revoked on 15 May and only now I'm able to comment. That's why I've only been reading and hearting your stuff without commenting.
That middle line - oof. Exceptional. Well done Kodah.
Ah, the ever-elusive dream of peace. Great poem, Kodah <3
Noooooo I want the peace and light! She can shine bright …can’t she? 🫶🏻🫶🏻❤️🥰 The light of God surround us… do you know the prayer of protection? It is beautiful. After the ugly will be beauty, just how long to there?
Oof, this is haunting and lovely! Sometimes it really feels like Earth isn't built for gentle souls… but dang, we still keep hoping, don’t we? 💖
I agree. Can't we just all find peace & love for once?