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as he is

we do not share this moment

By ⸘jason alan‽Published 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read

as he is

and i watch him full of chaos, anger, and love

so, we are both alone

i then watch the puffing of his chest

and when it descends, inevitable

no breath under water, antediluvian

we do not share this moment

as he wakes

and i watch him see the light and rise

so, we are both alone

i then watch his hands stiffly fold

within the frozen blue in his eyes

unhidden behind lids, rapid and furious

we do not share this moment

as he leaves

and i watch him want to belong here

so, we are both alone

i then watch; how easily he rested

some kind of loose association

not found guilty; but stoic, irreverent

we do not share this moment

as i sleep

and he watches me become liminal

so, we are both alone

he then intended to be my dreams

followed with ruthless intensity

deep imagination, with shallow interest

so we do not share this moment, again

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About the Creator

⸘jason alan‽

:::WARNING:::

i am only responsible for what i say,

not for what you understand.

you may learn to be charmed by my [secret‽] discontent,

or you may not.

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  • Joe O’Connor2 years ago

    This was an interesting read, and I wonder what will happen to the relationship, which feels like it’s on the brink. The repetition of “we do not share this moment” is powerful.

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