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Badlands and Burros

A sonnet about our summer Birthday trip for our daughter

By KJ AartilaPublished 5 years ago 1 min read
The Badlands in South Dakota.

Miles of straight road drove the experience

for a pre-teen Birthday girl’s shining spark

we made our way in awe from North to whence

Black Hills became Badlands to Custer Park.

The entrance to Custer State Park and our daughter.

Enjoying the park loop, the untamed scene,

we came upon the jumbled sight ahead

“What is causing that traffic jam?” asks she;

then we see the long ears and massive head

The traffic jam.

as a fat burro made his marching charge

from grassy ditch to our stopped car for sweets

promptly sticking his expectant large

face into the driver’s window for treats.

The Burro that came to visit us.

We only had red licorice to feed,

satisfied was his great sugary greed.

An up-close shot of our burro enjoying his snacks.

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KJ Aartila

A writer of words in northern WI with a small family and a large menagerie.

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