Badlands and Burros
A sonnet about our summer Birthday trip for our daughter

Miles of straight road drove the experience
for a pre-teen Birthday girl’s shining spark
we made our way in awe from North to whence
Black Hills became Badlands to Custer Park.

Enjoying the park loop, the untamed scene,
we came upon the jumbled sight ahead
“What is causing that traffic jam?” asks she;
then we see the long ears and massive head

as a fat burro made his marching charge
from grassy ditch to our stopped car for sweets
promptly sticking his expectant large
face into the driver’s window for treats.

We only had red licorice to feed,
satisfied was his great sugary greed.

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KJ Aartila
A writer of words in northern WI with a small family and a large menagerie.
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