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Barbed Wire Wall

Poetry on Divides

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 6 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Barbed Wire Wall
Photo by Yc Liao on Unsplash

Barriers may fall, but not their shadows.

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Barbed wire unravels

Spools across streets

Holed. Cratered.

Unerasable scars

Fester

Mould that stays.

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A child sees all

Peeking through a curtain

The eaves above his window

Try to close.

Protect.

The smell of stone,

Damp,

Dividing.

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It falls.

Shatters

In parts.

Concrete

Remains.

A whole heart--

Now two.

Sentences, cut off

Half spoken.

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His eyes--

Open.

Eyelids raised.

Time does not--

Stop.

She

Hums his name

A lullaby

In a prison

Beyond the wire.

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Concrete

Crumbled.

Still hardens

lost souls.

In streets

With patched holes.

A soft lullaby

Hummed.

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The soft lilt

trails.

But then circles.

With etched footprints

That spool--

Beyond

New

Wire.

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Original poem by Michelle Liew. AI tags are coincidental.

For Mikeydred's August prompt:

And Vocal's This is How I remember It Challenge:

inspirationalFree Verse

About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • L.I.E6 months ago

    A very strong feeling poem. Love the vivid details of it as well.

  • This was so emotional. Loved your poem!

  • Sandy Gillman6 months ago

    This really sticks with you… so vivid and heavy with emotion.

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