The line fades between
heaven and infinity,
where seabirds count souls.
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Compelling and original writing
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The Devil's Triangle
The sails ruffled in the breeze as we cruised along. The Sea Breeze was a mid-size catamaran that sailed out of Royal Naval Dockyard in Bermuda. We had booked this trip weeks in advance and were now looking at our Captain, Spike and two boat hands. Paddy and Wilson seemed like nice guys, joking around with the passengers and telling us some stories about Bermuda that only locals would know. Their island accents sounded almost British but they were pleasant to listen to.
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That's a beauty Cathy! Is that a personal photo? So appropriate!
Absolutely Beautiful.
You are the Haiku master, Cathy! Beautiful!
βWhere seabirds count soulsβ- donβt know why, but this is such a pleasing line Cathy. I like how broad this feelsπ
Wow. Love the feeling this haiku creates. Such marvelous work π©΅
Whoa! This was flawless & amazing!
Oh wow, this one is amazing! Gave me chills! Beautiful, my friend! β¨π©·
A very evocative Sky-ku Cathy: From the title βBlurred linesβ to the last line βwhere seabirds count souls.β Pauline πΈ
well done
I love the mystery of that last line. Excellent haiku Cathy! π π
Lovely words!
B e a u t I f u l
Just when we think youβve wowed us. You blow us away with another
Ooh, I like this one, playing with horizons, literal and life and death
So beautifully done!β
What a pretty haiku! Well done!
Simply stunning! I love this, Cathy!
Beautiful β€οΈ
Exquisite! Such a beautiful and mysterious moment you've created, my friend β€οΈ
Gorgeous
Cathy, this was heart stilling.... I absolutely adore this!!
Captivating!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπ
Gorgeous
This. Is. Sublime. bar set high with this one buddy TS and beyond! well done!
I NEVER do "outstanding, compelling" for a haiku. Until now π