delicate rain drops
perfectly holding tension
- splat violently
philosopher, alchemist, writer & poet with a spirit of fire & passion for all things health & love related 💫
“Darkness to me is like water to the sea”
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We give our heart to people, we handle the tensions, and they step on our heart. Splat! Lol. I'm sorry, I know that's now what you meant here but it's the first thing that came to mind. Loved your Haiku!
I really like how the peace is splattered by the last line. Excellent
Powerful, comical and sad. Love it, lass!
That end-line really is dramatic and I'm here for it
Don't usually like haiku much... too short... but I liked this one. Lovely and can have different meanings 💙 Anneliese
So perfect and then splat! Loved this! Sort of funny and sad at the same time.
Brilliantly done Kayleigh!
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Comments (7)
We give our heart to people, we handle the tensions, and they step on our heart. Splat! Lol. I'm sorry, I know that's now what you meant here but it's the first thing that came to mind. Loved your Haiku!
I really like how the peace is splattered by the last line. Excellent
Powerful, comical and sad. Love it, lass!
That end-line really is dramatic and I'm here for it
Don't usually like haiku much... too short... but I liked this one. Lovely and can have different meanings 💙 Anneliese
So perfect and then splat! Loved this! Sort of funny and sad at the same time.
Brilliantly done Kayleigh!