Breeze
A Nonet that should have really been entitled Ghost, but I have two pieces already called that...
Breeze
people often felt a presence that
stayed with them, comparable to
a gentle hug that would let
go when a gentle wind
would blow me away,
I was rarely
seen, just a
farewell
ghost
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Alyson Smith
Writer & Artist with Level I Autism & a whole lot of Bipolar. Based in Newcastle- upon - Tyne, works as an administrator in a Nursing Home. MA in Creative Writing.
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You could have called it "Gost Too" or "Ghost Two" or Ghost Ooo" or Ghost Free" š»š»š» but it is an excellent nonet
Really liked that.
Perfectly crafted