๐ Cats with Attitude...
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I am like
A Cat in Love with a Fish
Wishing That I could swim.
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HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)
โ Public Diary, of an Urban LGBTQ Poet
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CUTE!
Very good.
uuu cuttie cat
That was fun
Love this clever piece of writing my friend
Now that was brilliant lil bro! Exceptional & powerful!
Oh no, because once you learn to swim, they would somehow still drown you, lol! Just ignore me! I loved your poem!
Love it, Lonzo!
๐ ๐คฃ๐๐คฃ I mean, I know it's funny... because it's true. Love is like that!! This is just awesome!
Fabulous!!! Love this!!!โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐
Aw! This is really cute :)
That's what love will do to you sometimes! Excellent poem.
Thatโs deep! You told a story in just a few words. Brilliant work as always ๐๐๐ฝ๐๐ฝ ๐๏ธ๐ซก๐ซต๐ฝ
best cute
Lots of meaning in just a few words, well done.
Very cute ๐ฅฐ
What an interesting thought. I like it.
It is easy to wish the cat and fish luck. Adorable poem! ๐
Lol. That's great.
So cute! Made me smile. โบ๏ธ๐
Awwww, of course โค๏ธโค๏ธ