Creation's Cycle
The cycle of Earth's creation - Submitted to the Quadra-haiku challenge.
Dust came together
Rock and earth began to form
The world had been born.
...
Wind swept through the land
Seeds carried out through the air
The world became alive.
...
A new sun beat down
Rays of light brought fire and death
The world was damaged.
...
Life found a haven
Water protected and cleansed
The world was renewed.
About the Creator
Daniel Millington
A professional oxymoron apprentice whose mind is polluted with either bubbly grimdark romances or level headed chaos. Connect on:
https://bsky.app/profile/danielmillington.bsky.social
https://substack.com/@danielmillington1
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Easy to read and follow
Well-structured & engaging content
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Expert insights and opinions
Arguments were carefully researched and presented
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Masterful proofreading
Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Keep reading
More stories from Daniel Millington and writers in Poets and other communities.
Instructions Included Challenge Winners
For the Instructions Included challenge, we asked writers to tell a story through instructions and to trust the form to carry what could not be said outright. Across the top entries, that trust paid off in many different ways.
By Vocal Curation Team5 days ago in Resources
Comments (2)
This was so beautiful, the creation of the world and the beginning of life! Very well done!
SO gorgeous, Daniel. I love your take on this!