Ravaging us all
She returns us to the dust
To make room for more
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Dana Crandell
Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.
Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist
My poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity
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A Wedding Toast from the Father of the Bride
One of my daughter's lifelong curses is having a dad who thinks he's a writer. That being the case, when the first hint of her (second) wedding came up, this old fart had to start writing a toast to be given on the day. As it turned out, they eloped, with only a couple of friends in attendance, so I never got to recite it. Some people's kids!
By Dana Crandell4 years ago in Poets
The Light Turns
It's Tuesday 7:13 a.m. A cold and clear November morning awaits Ray on his morning commute. Ray rubs his hands together in the front seat of his Subaru. He turns the air temperature up, but keeps the air on low until the air warms up. He looks at the backup camera screen and reverses the Subaru out of his driveway onto Trimble Road.
By John R. Godwin4 days ago in Fiction
Comments (13)
Whoa, Dana, she's dark. One to watch out for.
Wowza. Worth the wait. Welcome back
Holy mothballs, Captain! This is astonishing! I decided to do a little search for some of my favourite writers on here and just pick random stuff I hadn't read - haikus are a good option because of their quick-readability quality. This is 14 words packed with so much truth and emotion. I applaud you for this, Dana! 👏
Dear Dana ~ So glad you are picking up the 'Sweet-Schtickle-Scents' along with our PhD-BuD with this one ~ How 'Udderly' Grabbing. *Please see our Step Mother's Story 'The Road Least Traveled' - she may bake us cookies - My 'Swinging on a Star' ~ Those Brits claim fame with that Oldie with their 'Out of this World' ~ Chum - Jay -
This is spectacular. Well done.
There's so much of truth in this! Loved the darkness! Very well done!
Eerie but beautiful and true. :) Well done!
Time. Impersonal, impartial, inevitable. Well done!
Really nice, a bit depressing, and deep.
Elegant. Loved it.
Mystical with so much meaning ♥️ Well done!
you nailed it Dana, nice entry 😀
Powerful twist in the last line.