Ethical Counterpoint
For Paul Stewart's 'Remix' Challenge
Here is a link to the challenge:
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ethical event?
counting up the points of the
livid change around us...
in my mind, utter
peace for the
season's
exit
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Here is a link to the original poem:
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Comments (5)
Great remix! I had to have your poem & the original up at the same time & compare lines to appreciate exactly how clever this is!✅
Amazing, I love how you played with the theme.
Oooo, you selected your own poem to remix! Loved your Acrostic remix!
Rule breaker, sir! If I wasn't such a bad stickler for the rules myself, I'd have to disqualify you, but I'd be being a massive hypocrite and love that you let creativity and inspiration take you where it wanted to go! Thank you for entering and well done on such a cool piece! Really fine work, Kendall!
Oh, mixing Paul's unofficial challenge with the eclipse prompt was smart! ;)