Flesh Out Lord
Mother's Day Rage— Blitz Poetry

"Not all mother-daughter relationships are pretty in pink."
— Chantal C Weiss
Thorn in your side,
thorn in the flesh
flesh it out,
flesh and blood
blood runs deep,
blood runs stains
stains my mind,
stains my heart
heart torn scars,
heart feels heavy
heavy silence,
heavy mind
mind tortured,
mind echoes memories
memories of my life,
memories of my mother
Motherfucker
mother Nature
nature verses nurture,
nurture got it wrong
wrong fucked up love,
wrong in many ways
ways to make it cruel,
ways to hurt your children
Children are a blessing
children are our legacy
Legacy, an inheritance
legacy, our future
future feels bleak,
future feels unknown
unknown like the mist,
unknown dense grief
Grief is my sorrow,
grief carved my tears
Tears fell in childhood,
tears fell for years
years fell by the wayside
years filled with rejection
rejection from parents,
rejection pushed me to God
God is comfort
God is love
Love is fuel
Love is the drug
drug trip
drug Lord
Lord have mercy
Lord knows
knows
Mercy
I live in the UK, and here in England we will be celebrating Mother’s Day tomorrow, 30th March 2025.
I have no contact or a close bond with my mother, which I wrote a little about here. I used to struggle terribly when this event arrived each year. Pushing down the facts, I now focus on my daughter and how we can change our legacy.
Blitz poetry was created by Robert Keim and is a 50-line poem of short phrases and images.
How to create a blitz poem
Line 1 should be one short phrase or image
Line 2 should be another short phrase or image using the same first word as the first word in Line 1
Lines 3 and 4 should be short phrases or images using the last word of Line 2 as their first words
Lines 5 and 6 should be short phrases or images using the last word of Line 4 as their first words, and so on until you’ve made it through 48 lines
Line 49 should be the last word of Line 48
Line 50 should be the last word of Line 47
The title of the poem should be three words long and follow this format: (first word of Line 3) (preposition or conjunction) (first word of line 47)There should be no punctuation
*It should be read very quickly, pausing only to take a breath
© Chantal Weiss 2025. All Rights Reserved
About the Creator
Chantal Christie Weiss
I serve memories and give myself up as a conduit for creativity.
My self-published poetry book: In Search of My Soul. Available via Amazon
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Chantal, Spiritual Bad/Ass
England, UK
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Amazing! Something new I'm learning here, about Blitz Poetry. Thanks for sharing.
"I know," she whispered back, her voice thick with emotion. "It’s like... with you, I’ve found a part of myself I didn’t even know was missing."
Wonderful poem! Great work!