I journey onwards
Encouraged by vapour trails
Scratching stripes through blue.
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— Ai Intrusion ~ Are you Next ~ Is Ai Evolution after your job? — Few workplaces haven't been affected. Ai is in supermarkets, at doctors' offices, and even monitoring farms. I just can't think of anything this machine is not getting into, can you? For instance: Education ~ Law and Tech jobs will one day have a major influence or be taken over by these inanimate machines, with accuracy and vigor. From mechanics' diagnoses to a wide variety of everyday jobs, including fast food workers, with this input having the ability to cut their unnecessary work hours. I'm certain all of us have been touched by this with our short stories and colorful headings, have you? Even comments are very questionable 'Non-Robot' insertions.
By Jay Kantor6 days ago in Journal
Comments (14)
Beautiful Haiku - Nicely Done!!
Ever on....lovely.
Why does this make me feel tired?
Rachel, this is so beautiful and paints such a wonderful picture!!
amazing
Ah vapor trails - you literally make me want to hop on a plane and jet off somewhere lovely. BRILL entry.
Lovely! First sky-ku entry I’ve read and already a high bar has been set
Oh, this is lovely. Well done.
Gorgeous! Paints such a picture!
I love this! Sort of like pursuing an ethereal bread crumb trail through the skies. I should have wrote my thoughts before reading Dharrsheena’s reflections, however.
Another beauty, chum, well done!
Very interesting!
Help, I truly need help. Tell me why did I think that the vapour trails were fart and they were scratching their butt through their striped blue underwear?! There's something very wrong with me, isn't there? But I loved your Haiku!
Hello 👋, this is nice. .