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Fragments of a Walk

In Thought Between the Store and Home

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 8 months ago Updated 8 months ago 1 min read
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The bag had torn. I hadn’t checked

and now the seam gave way

not fast enough to drop it all

not strong enough to stay

A child scraped chalk across the bricks

then wiped it with his shirt

he watched the white return to red

and scuffed along the dirt

A window kept a bare chair

no cushion, only frame

the shape of someone left behind

whose silence held a name

My shoe picked up a foil square

or something thin and gray

it curled with me. It wouldn’t leave.

I brought it anyway

A dog behind a wire rail

stood still beside a dish

no sound, no blink, no wag or plea

as if he had one wish

The man outside the grocer’s door

held something in his lap

a cup or horn, I couldn’t tell

he didn’t lift the flap

I didn’t stop or speak or nod

the bag had grown too thin

I crossed the street without a thought

and let the rest begin

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Beautiful and Brutal Things, his latest book.

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  • Cristal S.8 months ago

    Loved it! I felt like I was walking there myself.

  • Tiffany Gordon8 months ago

    Fabulous writing Tim! You capture emotions very well!

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