I don’t remember the beginning
pursuing, winning me over
He made it all exciting.
- secrets woven in lies -
A clean soul SCOOPED me
into his arms,
from that muck,
and loved
me.
** Memories of a jerk who created excitement, anger, incredible hurt and then a wonderful man with a kind and true soul found me - so good that how the other relationship began is lost to my memory - a thankful good riddance.
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The chipped stone slope caused unbearable footing. I slid, skirting on my heels. I cast my shield, relinquishing my guard to stay upright. Left with my double-edge and a prayer to the maker, I skated toward my objective. The earthly stubble gave way to solid ground. I found myself restored, a trail of dust in my wake.
By James U. Rizzi6 days ago in Fiction
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Lovely. Congratulations on top story!
Your nonet truly reveals the pain of how from a jerk You turned into a real love arms I love this story of Life with a Love ending and new beginning greatly written in a nonet ! a transformative nonet :)
It's beautiful! I love it!
Nice twist to a happy ending - and yes, good riddance! Enjoyed this!
Good riddance indeed!
This was a powerful and expressive read. Wonderful!
Wonderful take on Breakup Nonet challenge… love your positive ending ❤️.
Way to go and enjoy your new ideal.
A happy ending!
Really liked how this extended beyond the break up into a new hopeful phase!
Awww... incredibly conveyed, Andrea! 💌
It's a testament to the power of a genuine connection, overshadowing the remnants of a toxic past, amazing, love it, thank you very for sharing!
Good riddance! So happy for you Andi! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Remembering good things and purging bad ones is good for a soul. Great nonet, Andrea!
Good work!😊💕
And a good riddance it is.
We celebrate new beginnings in relationships, Andrea. Well said.