love is first exciting needlepokes
new
shining
sharp
bringing vibrant colour
wonder unfolds
gasping
pulling
a spell begun
it's faded hues
newness giving way
to tiny, cramped stitches
beautifully crafted
shared lives depicted
vivid detail
it's stitches dropped
wonky knots
little blips that belong
a spell woven
over a lifetime
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L.C. Schäfer
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Comments (20)
Beautiful and metaphoric! Love it.
ohhhh this piece is so well done.... love how you tie every stage into something else!
Beautifully creative and expressed so well.
This is great! I love the metaphor linking embroidery and love.
Well-wrought! Love makes a much better family tapestry than war-banner.
I especially loved the last two lines! Well done!
I really enjoy this metaphor between a growing love and the process of weaving together a tapestry. Nicely done!
Love the use of photos to amplify the journey. Excellent!!!!
perfectly, beautifully written!
Beautiful, love this in its simplicity!! Great work LC!
Well now, this is all sorts of perfect. Well done on this entry. love the metaphor and your words and the images!
Awesome! And it’s cool you included pictures in yours too’ 😁
Very well written, L.C. Wonderful metaphor!
That was so creative. Well done!
So cute and clever
Similarities with first learning to stitch and learning to adjust with our love relationship. Very deep
You stitched that metaphor together beautifully! The final stanza was a perfect ending and so true
Beautifully written!
I loved how it went through the journey of new and exciting to eventually finding its way to be lasting and belonging. That was great!
What a beautiful comparison, our lives stitched together, who knows what the final product may actually look like.