Holding the Moon
Sky-ku
By Cathy holmesPublished about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
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as stars hold the moon,
I held you up, watched you shine.
come morn, set you free.
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Comments (24)
i always have time for your work... you so amazing 👌
How lovely!
AW! so sweet, to the moon and beyond/
Beautiful and a little heartbreaking!! Love this Cathy!!
Gorgeous & so unique!
This is so lovely.
Such lovely simple imagery! Really beautiful!
This poem is beautiful! I can feel the love and care in your words.
That feels like adoration
Wonderful wonderful haiku!
So beautiful. Well done Cathy.
Sublime and brilliant :)
So lovely, my friend. ❤️ Gorgeous work!
Queen of haiku!!
And if it comes back, it's yours. Hehehe. Loved your Haiku!
Poignant and sweet
Wonderfully written!
☺️ 👍 Beautifully expressed.
Cherish the night, this little haiku says.A thoughtful one.
Oh so lovely and poignant :) Excellent piece, my friend.
So lovely, Cathy.
This is incredibly beautiful, Cathy
Cathy this is so moving and the graphic is perfect. I always learn so much frim you. ‘Whereas haiku focuses on nature, senryu is concerned with human nature.’ Thank you for the opportunity to read Pauline 🌸
Beautiful, my friend! Just perfect. 🩷