I Always See Stars
That person who makes the world less lonely
Have you ever wondered...?
>> What the sky would look like without stars?
It would be dark…
>> It would feel lonely.
We'd still have the moon…
>> But I'd be lost without the stars.
They are always hard to see in the city…
>> But I know they're there.
I suppose that's true.
>> It has to be.
And if they weren't?
>> I would lose hope.
Wow, they mean that much to you?
>> They show me that just because I can't see something now doesn't mean I won't see it tomorrow.
Humm, I like that
>> …The stars make the night less lonely.
I don't think I need the stars…
>> You don't?
Not when I have you.
>> Me?
You're my star.
>> I am?
Well, you give me hope and make me feel less lonely.
>> I don't think that makes me a star…
Just because you can't see it doesn't mean it's not true.
>> I suppose.
You're a star to me. You've just forgotten how much you shine.
>> I like that.
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About the Creator
Simon George
I write poetry, fiction, and non-fiction. In 2021, I published my debut book "The Truth Behind The Smile" a self-help guide for your mental health based on my personal experience with depression. Go check it out.
IG: @AuthorSimonGeorge
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Comments (12)
I really enjoyed this, the softness… the delicate feeling reading it 🤍🌟
Sweet and Beautiful💕
Beautiful sentiment and poem! Congrats on Top Story!
Oh man, this made me cry. My star just moved across the country and I miss their light already
Wow, this is my best pick. You have talent. Keep on shining.
Everyone should be told this 💕 “You're a star to me. You've just forgotten how much you shine.” ✨✨✨✨ congratulations on top story!!! 🥳
Very sweet conversation with depth and sincere emotion
Congrats on TS
Beautiful
and, yes, great Top Story, congratulations.🎉🎉🎉🎉
FABULOUS! I love the stars and the night sky (such that we can see without light pollution!), and this says it so beautifully. "The stars make the night less lonely. " and hope - wonderful!
This is a lovely piece. You have talent. Looking forward to read more.