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In My Way

A Villanelle of Succulent Choices

By Gerard DiLeoPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Low-Hanging Fruit of the Tree of Knowledge

It's hard to know what's right or wrong I bray

Low-hanging fruit will smack my head instead

When right seems wrong and wrong is in my way

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To reach that branch so near without delay

The Tree of Life wilts down with branches dead

It's hard to know what's right or wrong I bray

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The fam'ly tree of black and white grows gray

Umbilical cord canopies misread

When right seems wrong and wrong is in my way

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I have to stack my plate at life's soirée

Hand out to me and mine and — then — their bread

It's hard to know what's right or wrong I bray

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Becoming hungry forces me astray

To sack that tree until no fruit is shed

When right seems wrong and wrong is in my way

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No choice is fairly priced for me to pay

When I compete with others to be fed

It's hard to know what's right or wrong I bray

When right seems wrong and wrong is in my way

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About the Creator

Gerard DiLeo

Retired, not tired. Hippocampus, behave!

Make me rich! https://www.amazon.com/Gerard-DiLeo/e/B00JE6LL2W/

My substrack at https://substack.com/@drdileo

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    "Umbilical cord canopies misread". Oooo, I really loved that line. As always, you blew my minds with this Villanelle!

  • Paul Stewart2 years ago

    Ooooh...love this...had such amazing flow and very thought-provoking. Well done, Gerard!

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