He's feels content,
She's not comfortable,
There's a cold chill,
He watches her from the distance,
She glances back,
As she walks away
She has a smile on her face,
Because she left
He is now by himself,
She is happy,
He feels empty,
...
Now read it from the bottom up
About the Creator
Dylan
Hello, Welcome to my creative journey!
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— Ai Intrusion ~ Are you Next ~ Is Ai Evolution after your job? — Few workplaces haven't been affected. Ai is in supermarkets, at doctors' offices, and even monitoring farms. I just can't think of anything this machine is not getting into, can you? For instance: Education ~ Law and Tech jobs will one day have a major influence or be taken over by these inanimate machines, with accuracy and vigor. From mechanics' diagnoses to a wide variety of everyday jobs, including fast food workers, with this input having the ability to cut their unnecessary work hours. I'm certain all of us have been touched by this with our short stories and colorful headings, have you? Even comments are very questionable 'Non-Robot' insertions.
By Jay Kantor5 days ago in Journal
Comments (5)
This takes me back, we live it both ways, if lucky we have the inverse of the inverse and all is well. It is great though when feelings are mutual and peace abides. This is really great Dylan, I have not quite mastered the writing of it, though the concept is clear. Kudos.
Nice job on the inverse! I like the portrayal of one event through two perspectives.
Very creative.
Nice use of the inverse!
Very sad. The two points of view of a break-up. It's bittersweet, isn't it? I'm able to relate to the experience, know it's pain, and yet you write it with such tenderness, making it palatable and beautiful...