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Life Is Eternity

Love Is Life

By Susan PaytonPublished 9 months ago Updated 9 months ago 1 min read
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Life goes by

If you are lucky you will win

If you are unlucky you will loose

But what you do is up to you

You are the master of your own destiny

Your choices are your very own

Choose Wisely and you will see

Life Is Love

Love Is Eternity

inspirational

About the Creator

Susan Payton

I love to write in every venue. I am 75 years old and try to make every day count,. I am learning a great deal about poetry on Vocal, and I am glad to be here.

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  • Gregory Payton7 months ago

    So true and nicely Done!!

  • Jay Kantor9 months ago

    Dear Susan - I want to say back here about what you said as a comment on my "Circles of Life" to keep it more private; I will delete this soon so as not to embarass anyone. I'm so sorry for your loss and sorrow. I feel you in every way. If you have a moment, please see my "Victims~Too" - My Respect - Jay Kantor, Chatsworth, California 'Senior' Vocal Author - Vocal Village Community -

  • You have put the entire life span in a nutshell. Couldn't agree more. Brilliantly written truth @Susan Payton

  • D.K. Shepard9 months ago

    Wonderful sentiment, Susan!

  • Antoni De'Leon9 months ago

    Truth, in every word.

  • Marie381Uk 9 months ago

    So very true Susan ♦️♦️♦️

  • Rohitha Lanka9 months ago

    Captivating poem and well written.

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