With a kiss
Seal the deal,
Lock and key
And ease my pain.
Run from the rain,
Join the soul.
You and I
Lock the lips
My core will part
Join your core,
We are now one.
Like a rose on the hill,
No fear of rain
To harm or pain,
We feel the air,
Soak the sun,
You and I,
Seal the deal
With a kiss
Lock and key.
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Sid Aaron Hirji
Canadian born man who finds literature and science equally fascinating. Trauma bleeds through generations, words heal the hidden scars.
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Comments (7)
nice poem!
great job
I love the wird play here, especially "Lock the lips"
The roll-along and joining of the parts is spectacular. Great metaphors.
Brilliant performance and love poem!!! Loved it!!!
One holds the lock, the other the key. May they always stay attuned to each other,
Such an interesting concept to compare the joining of souls in love to a lock and key. Nice work, especially with the restrictive nature of the challenge