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Luna Retreat Request

Post-check of awful in the rear-view...

By The Dani WriterPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
Luna Retreat Request
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Divine-ordained revolutions

and evidence to back it up

You gleam answers and effects clad in celestial garments

Upon my life

there existed zero nonbelievers

Not a one

who questioned that I turned into

your first-begotten rebel-mood-child

your eyes witness of majesty

your sweet water drawn

your soul breathing orbital laws

now in continuous retch

on world sickness stench

Immovable sameness is priceless premium nowadays

Safety in beauty at a distance I guess

(Shoulda known)

An inhospitable environment

since the eternal damned take liberties

down to the remnants

Moon Mama More Ancient Than Time

My crystal clarity craved and quiet silver vindication

while others wished on stars

my urges embraced forever moon

envious of atmosphere potential to arrest corruption

from leaders

who lead nowhere

but won't stop yapping

at every godawful prime time opportunity

Economic growth bellows calamitous crescendos

to puncture eardrums

and then intellect

over time

I crave a void

A retreat not of this earth

where sentience communes its monthly vibrations

in satisfied silence

yet freely provides illumination for all

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The Dani Writer

Explores words to create worlds with poetry, nonfiction, and fiction. Writes content that permeates then revises and edits the heck out of it. Interests: Freelance, consultations, networking, rulebook-ripping. UK-based

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  • Tiffany Gordon3 months ago

    So stunning, regal & full of impact! Go Dani! 🫶🏾💪🏾💕

  • Imola Tóth3 months ago

    Very well written! I wanted to cite my favorite line, but by the end I figured I could copy almost the entire scriptum!

  • Aarsh Malik3 months ago

    This poem reads like a lament and a prayer at once, translating global chaos into something intimate and reflective.

  • Komal3 months ago

    Whoa gurll, this one absolutely howls with lunar longing!!🌕✨ Moon Mama More Ancient Than Time” —that line alone deserves a shrine.

  • "your soul breathing orbital laws now in continuous retch on world sickness stench" These were my favourite lines! Your poem was so profound. I loved it!

  • Marilyn Glover3 months ago

    "I crave a void A retreat not of this earth where sentience communes its monthly vibrations in satisfied silence yet freely provides illumination for all" I love this part, Dani❣

  • Novel Allen3 months ago

    Moon's ears are ringing as she blushes at the praise, please and questions,

  • K.B. Silver 3 months ago

    👏👏🌟

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