Luna Retreat Request
Post-check of awful in the rear-view...
Divine-ordained revolutions
and evidence to back it up
You gleam answers and effects clad in celestial garments
Upon my life
there existed zero nonbelievers
Not a one
who questioned that I turned into
your first-begotten rebel-mood-child
your eyes witness of majesty
your sweet water drawn
your soul breathing orbital laws
now in continuous retch
on world sickness stench
Immovable sameness is priceless premium nowadays
Safety in beauty at a distance I guess
(Shoulda known)
An inhospitable environment
since the eternal damned take liberties
down to the remnants
Moon Mama More Ancient Than Time
My crystal clarity craved and quiet silver vindication
while others wished on stars
my urges embraced forever moon
envious of atmosphere potential to arrest corruption
from leaders
who lead nowhere
but won't stop yapping
at every godawful prime time opportunity
Economic growth bellows calamitous crescendos
to puncture eardrums
and then intellect
over time
I crave a void
A retreat not of this earth
where sentience communes its monthly vibrations
in satisfied silence
yet freely provides illumination for all




Comments (8)
So stunning, regal & full of impact! Go Dani! 🫶🏾💪🏾💕
Very well written! I wanted to cite my favorite line, but by the end I figured I could copy almost the entire scriptum!
This poem reads like a lament and a prayer at once, translating global chaos into something intimate and reflective.
Whoa gurll, this one absolutely howls with lunar longing!!🌕✨ Moon Mama More Ancient Than Time” —that line alone deserves a shrine.
"your soul breathing orbital laws now in continuous retch on world sickness stench" These were my favourite lines! Your poem was so profound. I loved it!
"I crave a void A retreat not of this earth where sentience communes its monthly vibrations in satisfied silence yet freely provides illumination for all" I love this part, Dani❣
Moon's ears are ringing as she blushes at the praise, please and questions,
👏👏🌟