She glides unfettered
Into every world I live
Leaving me breathless
About the Creator
Laerilee
I began writing when I was young, but I had a million excuses why I never shared my creations with anyone. 30 years later I woke up with Soulmate in my mind, sharing its' first breaths with me...
A Love Forboding
The chipped stone slope caused unbearable footing. I slid, skirting on my heels. I cast my shield, relinquishing my guard to stay upright. Left with my double-edge and a prayer to the maker, I skated toward my objective. The earthly stubble gave way to solid ground. I found myself restored, a trail of dust in my wake.
By James U. Rizzi6 days ago in Fiction
Comments (4)
This one reads like a breath held between moments—soft, graceful, and deeply felt. ‘Into every world I live’ is such a striking line. I’m reading through all the entries now, and yours felt like a quiet tribute that lingers. Beautifully done.
Hi Laerilee, I noticed you tried commenting on my "500 Reads Haiku Chrllenge post. Qas this the haiku you wanted to submit to the challenge? If so, please respond to this comment so I can add the link to the comments section of my post. This is a beautiful piece and would love for it to be considered for the challenge. 🫶
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That's awesome❤️🥰