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My Sensual Sultana

Unnecessary Anticlimax

By Lightning Bolt ⚡Published about 9 hours ago Updated about 9 hours ago 1 min read
Top Story - November 2025
Listening to her breathing & the patter of the rain.

This is an older poem of mine revamped and re-titled for the challenge.

______________________

I was arid.

I was a sandstorm

and then you rose out of the heat-haze.

🔆  ҉ 🔥 ҉ ☀ ҉ 🔥 ҉ 🔆

Ardent desire compelled me.

Feverish moments followed, enrapturing

~~~entrancing

~~~enthralling me.

We found a cool private shelter

where we made our swelter moist

~~~muggy

~~~molten.

🛌😇

Blessed are bedroom breedings,

the ecstatic fleshly exercises

where every delectation we exchanged

⚡ electrified already-exhilarated nerves.

Watching ___lightning strikes⚡in the distance ⛈

awaiting the thunderclaps

You Happen Again

~~~reverberating。・゚゚・ ・゚゚・。

r~e~p~e~a~t~ing‿︵‿︵‿︵‿︵‿︵‿

rehabilitating my atmosphere.

⚡ _____ ⚡

We collide like dust & rain.

⚡ _____ ⚡

Obsessed

possessed

surrendering elicits tender mercies.

Explicit utterances expose me

revealing the endowed insecurities

by way of my extreme

**supreme**

~wet dream ~

concupiscence.

The dispassionate jury scrutinized our performance for any malfunctions.

Savoring sweet seepage leaves me besotted

inebriating like heady wine,

an elixir secreting scents that inflame,

like perfumed fire.

The erotic epicenter provides delicious delirium

devouring thee exceeds every

(*^3^)/~♡+ delightful+expectation +_(´ε` )!

The yearning becomes increasingly urgent.

Our writhe

our wriggle

our wrestle

our sweaty-hot hunger impelling us

~~~fragmenting wholesomeness

~~~feeding decadence

~~~~~freeing the explorers inside.

My need extends

___erect___

SWELLING

pressed against humid heaven ✧・゚:*❤*:・゚✧

Opening yourself to me

~~~exposed

~~~exquisite

the embrace empowers us both!

The Treasures We Discover Together!!!

✼  ҉ ҉ ҉ ҉ ҉ ✼ The blend!

✼  ҉ ҉ ҉ ҉ ҉ ✼ The beauty!

✧・゚:* *:・゚✧☆.。.:* .。.:*☆✧・゚:* *:・゚✧ The BLISSsssssssssssss.....°。°。°。°。☆*:..。. .。.:*☆:.。・. .・。.:☆。°。°。° ・・・・..........

________

We are exalted in our euphoria.

________

Exhausted

you then pursue your dreams

alone.

And I'm left to wonder

'What

just

happened

here?'

I can't sleep.

Listening to the the wind and the rain

I stand beside as you

as you silently slumber.

~z~z~‿︵‿︵‿︵‿︵‿︵‿~z~z~

________

Are you my oasis?

Or must I return to the dry desert 🌵

when this downpour passes?

🌵

___________________Bolt

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About the Creator

Lightning Bolt ⚡

Bolt aka Bill, a bizarre bisexual bipolar epileptic⚡🧠⚡ Taco Bell Futurist 🌮🔔

Memes! Madness! LSD! Hell🔥!😈 Creepy Crazy ghosts!

🩸Thrash!!🩸 SCREAM!!! 😱 Demons & Phobias & Prophets, oh my!

Poetry ~ Challenge ~ Winners!

I am shock therapy. ⚡😁👍

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    Original narrative & well developed characters

  2. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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    Creative use of language & vocab

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  • SUEDE the poetabout 2 hours ago

    This might be one of my favorites I’ve read in a while. So good! Two of my favorite lines: 1) “You Happen Again” and 2) “We collide like dust and rain.” Thank you for this!

  • Raphael Fontenelleabout 9 hours ago

    Very creative. Wow.

  • Julie Lacksonen22 days ago

    Steamy!! I love this, except for the sad end. I wish the lovers could have stayed awake together long enough to satisfy the desires. 💜

  • Love the creativity and energy. WOW ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

  • The use of multiple fonts and emojis and symbols was something new to me which was at first distracting and then intriguing. I may look at using them in my own poetry (though I'm somewhat more plain and traditional in my presentation). The poem itself was very steamy (shall try to read it again somewhere privately, later in the day).

  • Cryptic Edwards2 months ago

    Wow what a stunning in depth top story for November absolutely incredible.

  • Marie381Uk 3 months ago

    Beautiful Top Story ♦️♦️♦️♦️🏆

  • Muddasar Rasheed3 months ago

    This is awesome and may I have this very soon https://about.me/simonleighpurereputation

  • Aarsh Malik3 months ago

    The shifting textures in your language, from arid to molten to humid, give the poem a vivid almost physical rhythm that pulls the reader in.

  • The Dani Writer3 months ago

    Great stars Bill! This is NEXT levels!

  • Sid Aaron Hirji3 months ago

    well deserved top story-sensory delight my friend

  • Gohar Ali3 months ago

    Top

  • Tiffany Gordon3 months ago

    Phenomenal writing Bill! fuego!🔥

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