Nocturnal
A Haiku
Please forgive me for
all of the times I chose not
to see you for you.
About the Creator
Natasha Collazo
Selected Writer in Residency, Champagne France ---2026
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By Natasha CollazoExclusive • about a year ago
Comments (23)
This was an amazing and packed a punch for such a small bit of poetry. Congratulations on the Top Story - it's well deserved.
Superior brevity.
Epic !
Yay top story! This is so good also!
Back to say congratulations!!!
omg
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
This is so poignant in so few words! Nice job!
Oh, we can all use this one for our loved ones. Fabulous job!! 🎈🎈Congratulations on TS😍
Brilliant
Congratulations on your top story 🌹
Back to say congrats!
Nice!!! 🔥 Congrats on your TS!
Why I was so late to read this! Top story, congrats!!!!!!!
Great haiku, Natasha! Congrats on Top Story!
A powerful haiku!
So powerful, so few words!
That was so deep and poignant. Loved your Haiku!
Oh! That last line really pulls it all together. Nicely done.
I loved the ending, very powerful haiku.
Very powerful work.
So simple, but with so much power. Great job, Natasha!
"I chose not to see you for you" Amazing!