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October at Eno River

Autumnal sensations

By Kate Kastelberg Published about a year ago 1 min read
Runner-up in Sensational II Challenge

Crisp carnival excitement fills the nostrils, billows the chest—cedar bark, leaf litter underfoot, campfire smoke and silt.

Northerly wind parts arm hairs to lean like pines in a hurricane, over hilled valleys of goosebumps.

Turtle hand sprays river drops to tongue, notes the ironic Spring bergamot taste.

Blue Heron splashes and soaks in the golden hour, calls to Owl and Crow to hold back the night.

Leaves fall as rocks stand stiller yet, to shelter crashing currents that sluice slanted light.

nature poetry

About the Creator

Kate Kastelberg

-cottage-core meets adventure

-revels in nature, mystery and the fantastical

-avoids baleful gaze of various eldritch terrors

-your Village Witch before it was cool

-under command of cats and owls

-let’s take a Time Machine back to the 90s

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  • Susan Payton11 months ago

    Beautiful imagery, and beautiful photo. Congratulations on your win.

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Back to say congrats!! Well deserved!

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    Flows as smooth as the stream! Congratulations, Kate!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Congratulations on the runner up win!!!🥰🥰🥰

  • Gabriel Huizengaabout a year ago

    Absolutely gorgeous work - congrats on the runner-up!!

  • Gregory Paytonabout a year ago

    Deep insights and rich word choices. Absolutely beautiful.

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Such rich word choice and imagery!! Beautiful work, Kate!

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