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Old Oaken Elder

Trail ten treat

By Chris SienerPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

This old oaken

tree trunk

shaped as a

horned bear

from the east

and a full body

knob wrap trap

from the west

.

Sits silently

along the sandy lane

observing swallowtails swooping

millipedes meandering

ferns fluttering

and mosquitoes buzzing

.

While my wife and I

walk through the forest green

giving witness to the wisdom

of this wise ol oak elder

wondering whether

the blue and orange

mushrooms lining the trail

are fit for consumption

or plagued with poison

.

As the old saying goes,

“If you don’t know, don’t go.”

.

Best to stick with

the late season blackberries

and leave the forest

with a sweet and sour taste

ready to hike adjacent

to this old oaken elder

another day

This old oak tree sits along Trail #10 at the Indiana Dunes State Park. The trail also features several boardwalks overlooking the marshland bogs home to numerous water lilies and dragon flies.

Hope this poem helps bring the trail to you.

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About the Creator

Chris Siener

Many poems and posts I write have a nature theme, with family or faith frame of reference.

Recently published my first poetry book called “The Art of Accompaniment, Prose, Pics, & Verse“ on Amazon. Hope you enjoy & thank you for reading.

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  • ReadShakurr2 years ago

    Uplifting, love your piece and your writing skill is top notch

  • Andrea Corwin 2 years ago

    LOVELY!! I grew up in Illinois and we went to the Dunes but it was so long ago…I now walk the forests of the Pacific NW - have many poems on Vocal about the sights I see. I loved this because it is like the ones I do - photos of trees or flowers or birds…and out pops a poem! Well done.

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