Manchild Kidsnatcher
Fights with a disabled man
Children's classic tale?
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Another entry into Judey Kalchik's very fun #BookReviewHaiku challenge thing.
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Paul Stewart
Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.
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Comments (11)
Hah!!!!! I am laughing my ass off at this!! Way too funny and so clever Paul!!! 🤣🤣
Oh, hell. This is great, Paul, but you just triggered another one I now have to write!
Of course it's classic! How many of us didn't swear we were never going to let ourselves grow/get old?
Hahahahahahahahahhahhahaha this was freaking hilarious! I loved it so much! 🍩🥐
Ok but to be fair, I think Peter Pan is creepy enough lol. This solidified that thought.
This cracks me up! 😂
lol. This is great.
Right to the point!
LMAO! Damn it, Paul, not again… 👻
Lol, nice one! Peter Pan has always been creepy…you can’t convince me otherwise.
Bahahaha!! Too funny as neither sound like a hero, now do they? Awesome haiku review :)