Raining Glitter
Everything comes to an end, but to get rid of the Darkness you have to let the light in...
Throughout the Midnight Sky,
I saw a Spark...
You compelled me to not believe my eyes...
I focused on you,
And I couldn't see the Glitter in the Sky 🌙
My Tears created foggy eyes...
You said that my Love Clouded your pride...
I didn't know if it was a good thing,
Until I missed the Glitter fall from the sky.
I sat alone in Shame because once again I was Distracted by a lie...
I'm reaching for you,
As you lust for someone else...
I was Ruined by heartbreak.
What should I do with what's left behind?
I cried a Million times but the Headache still abides...
I know that I should have been stronger,
To withstand this not so Loveable ride.
Nevertheless, I'll wipe my own eyes.
*******
Today I smiled without trying,
Maybe that's a sign to clear up my mind.
At that moment I felt the rain falling against my skin...
I felt vivacious I looked toward the atmosphere...
That's when I saw that it was Raining Glitter.
I kept my hope alive as I maintained my head to the sky 🌈 ✨😉
I decided to remember the sorrow but I held on to the Blessings!
I felt pain until I saw the
Glitter falls from the sky...
Bold
Brave
Wise
Strong
Possibilities
❤️😉💯❗
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Comments (22)
Nice,keep writing.
A poem for the glitterati, & an image our son surely would have enjoyed.
So beautiful :)
This is lovely! I have a different use for raining glitter, and you've inspired me. I'll tag you when I write it. This is a wonderfully well-written piece. Thank you!
Warm, vivid and optimistic writing! ✍️ Terrific work!
This was so beautiful and uplifting!
Very inspiring 🥰
Nice one!
Very good
Beautiful, Beautiful work little bro! BRAVO!👏🏾👏🏾
I love the way this starts with the heartbreak and finishes with an encouraging thought that slowly trails off into hope. I give this one an A++! ;)
Gorgeous imagery, so poignant yet hopeful. This is a great work! Love the subtitle!
the poem I like
You gotta let the sparkly stuff in , great words
So in love with this poem, Lonzo! 🥹❤️ Breathtaking work, as always! "I felt pain until I saw the Glitter falls from the sky..." BEAUTIFUL!! 😍
Beautiful work, as always friend! You have such talent!
Absolutely exquisite! Once again you strike a chord starting with your subtitle: "to get rid of the Darkness you have to let the light in..."
Rising from the ashes. Well done, Lonzo!
Beautiful poem! 🌙✨
Yes!! Had me from the very beginning ❤️💖
Oh, that glitter
Bold, brave, wise, strong. I think you summed yourself up in the end. Beautiful as always ♥️♥️