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Minute by minute
We try to mold the present,
carving away past.
About the Creator
Meg
Musings, poems, and stories
Wishing for World Peace
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Zero grammar & spelling mistakes
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Writing reflected the title & theme
from death into life
Young Aldin of Wiloh had never contemplated death. It was almost strange — so many around him had the tendency to obsess over it, to clamor and claw almost desperately at their own perceptions of the end to know death as much as they could: when it would come, why it would come, where it would take them when it did.
By angela hepwortha day ago in Fiction
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wow, incredibly talented!
Powerful Words
Talent!
Dang. The image of the past being a physical thing, and the present being the action of carving it is powerful. It takes a lot of talent to put an impactful message like that in three lines. Well done.
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Well, I'm Glad that you said it❗❗💯🙏😉❤️Congrats on Top Story🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
Absolutely amazing!
Love it.
Oh I love this. ❤️
Nice!
Love this!
Simple, but powerful, like a good haiku. Nice job!
This, is very well done
Such a big idea conveyed so well in just three short lines. Amazing! Congratulations on Top Story!!
Great
Lovely introspective on life.
Absolutely love this imagery. Simple yet profound.
What a difficult idea to process; one I’m trying to work on. Great work, hearted. Congratulations on top story!